• New Song: One True Love
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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #15 on: February 03, 2021, 22:45:44
Lovely song and wonderful voice man.  I cant possibly sing lines that slowly lol.  Kudos tto you for being able to hold notes that long and consistently for an entire song. 

The only suggestion I have is that I think the verse is just a bit too long.    I was caught off gaurd when it extended for two more lines.  I dont think you should cut down both verses, but cutting first verse back to 4 lines might add little bit of structual variety to it. 


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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #16 on: February 05, 2021, 07:25:03
Beautifully understated - and a really great vocal. I can hear a deep solo cello with this just padding out towards the build.
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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #17 on: February 08, 2021, 14:47:57
@muso1070  Congratulations!! ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::


Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #18 on: February 16, 2021, 03:05:45
i like that you found a twin to play with... it's like watching the Prestige.


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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #19 on: March 03, 2021, 17:30:15
Lovely song and wonderful voice man.  I cant possibly sing lines that slowly lol.  Kudos tto you for being able to hold notes that long and consistently for an entire song. 

The only suggestion I have is that I think the verse is just a bit too long.    I was caught off gaurd when it extended for two more lines.  I dont think you should cut down both verses, but cutting first verse back to 4 lines might add little bit of structual variety to it.

Hello sorry I missed these last few comments.
Thanks for listening and the feedback, I hear where your coming from totally.
I wouldn't have noticed as your sort of in so deep when writing or putting the tune together.
You could be right.


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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #20 on: March 03, 2021, 17:31:35
Beautifully understated - and a really great vocal. I can hear a deep solo cello with this just padding out towards the build.

Hey thanks very much  ;D
Love strings good call could be perfect for the studio version.

Thanks


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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #21 on: March 03, 2021, 17:32:12


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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #22 on: March 03, 2021, 17:34:45
i like that you found a twin to play with... it's like watching the Prestige.

Haha yes I may even bring in my other brother for a 3rd instrument  ;D


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Re: New Song: One True Love
Reply #23 on: March 05, 2021, 13:23:35
I love everything about this. Voice, guitar, lyrics, melody. Just subscribed to you on YouTube.

Amazing job with this!

-Micky



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