New Song: One True Love

Lovely song and wonderful voice man.  I cant possibly sing lines that slowly lol.  Kudos tto you for being able to hold notes that long and consistently for an entire song. 

The only suggestion I have is that I think the verse is just a bit too long.    I was caught off gaurd when it extended for two more lines.  I dont think you should cut down both verses, but cutting first verse back to 4 lines might add little bit of structual variety to it. 

Beautifully understated - and a really great vocal. I can hear a deep solo cello with this just padding out towards the build.

@muso1070  Congratulations!!

i like that you found a twin to play with... it's like watching the Prestige.

Lovely song and wonderful voice man.  I cant possibly sing lines that slowly lol.  Kudos tto you for being able to hold notes that long and consistently for an entire song. 

The only suggestion I have is that I think the verse is just a bit too long.    I was caught off gaurd when it extended for two more lines.  I dont think you should cut down both verses, but cutting first verse back to 4 lines might add little bit of structual variety to it.

Hello sorry I missed these last few comments.
Thanks for listening and the feedback, I hear where your coming from totally.
I wouldn't have noticed as your sort of in so deep when writing or putting the tune together.
You could be right.

Beautifully understated - and a really great vocal. I can hear a deep solo cello with this just padding out towards the build.

Hey thanks very much 
Love strings good call could be perfect for the studio version.

Thanks

@muso1070  Congratulations!!

Thanks

i like that you found a twin to play with... it's like watching the Prestige.

Haha yes I may even bring in my other brother for a 3rd instrument 

I love everything about this. Voice, guitar, lyrics, melody. Just subscribed to you on YouTube.

Amazing job with this!

-Micky