• New song online: I'll Find You
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New song online: I'll Find You
on: July 05, 2017, 22:34:46
After being offline for a while, I got myself together and recorded a song of mine. It's on YouTube: I'd like to get some feedback(:

The lyrics are in the description. It's about a 'friend' who messaged me 'I'm done with you' and that was the end of our friendship. I wanted answers what I did wrong but I never got those so she stayed stuck in my head. That's why I wrote this song. And I'm pretty happy with the result - also due to the fact that I got to work with a microphone and Garageband.

The chord progression is not that interesting but I did add some 7 and 9 chords:
Intro: Dmadd9 Dm
Verse: Am Fmaj7 Dm E+5 (later on E7)
Chorus: Dm Am Fmaj7 E7

Ps the song may be a little short but I have a hard time writing lyrics cause I'm not a native speaker:(


Re: New song online: I'll Find You
Reply #1 on: July 05, 2017, 23:19:27
sounds super cool when you sing! great voice, accent and great idea with the filter on the piano.

it really doesnt need anything but the thing i hear in my head is some cut up lofi drumloop in the end of the song or so.

great song :)

 


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Re: New song online: I'll Find You
Reply #2 on: July 05, 2017, 23:26:01
Awesome! That "sweeping" piano sound was a good idea! I may steal it and use it in my songs. ;)

And it got really interesting towards the end. I think you can make the final section a bit longer!

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Re: New song online: I'll Find You
Reply #3 on: July 05, 2017, 23:27:44
I loved this!  -great song and singing style and fantastic piano arrangement... It's the kind of song that will make me come back to have another listen :)  :)
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Re: New song online: I'll Find You
Reply #4 on: July 06, 2017, 00:38:55
Awesome! That "sweeping" piano sound was a good idea! I may steal it and use it in my songs. ;)

And it got really interesting towards the end. I think you can make the final section a bit longer!

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Do you mean the bridge or the last chorus by sweeping? Anyway, I'm glad I inspired you! Yeah I already repeated the chorus but it still ends quite suddenly so I'll think about that thanks!!


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Re: New song online: I'll Find You
Reply #5 on: July 06, 2017, 01:14:35
@lynnalyx I meant something like an EQ filter that's moving left and right!
And by "it got interesting" I meant the last chorus!!


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Re: New song online: I'll Find You
Reply #6 on: July 07, 2017, 00:27:24
Pretty cool atmospheric tune and fragile vocals combining well to make a quite original and engaging sound. yeah!  ::heart::
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