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New Song - Something New
on: February 26, 2019, 17:44:53
Back again with a new song! This one's laidback, like most of my songs, an alternative style, so let me know what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/jed-long/something-new

Lyrics:
Try something new,
It wonít hurt to try,
Unless you donít then it might,
Try something new

Hold me close and listen,
Iíve got news for you,
Thereís things out there to do now,
Try and you might succeed

Try something new,
It wonít hurt to try,
Unless you donít then it might,
Try something new

Youíve been alone too long,
Maybe itís time to try,
Get up, get out, get moving,
Do stuff you might enjoy

Try something new,
It wonít hurt to try,
Unless you donít then it might,
Try something new


Re: New Song - Something New
Reply #1 on: February 27, 2019, 01:36:46
@JedLong

The title of the song already announces what it contains, difference.
I really liked to hear you, the melody is totally original, I would say unique.

It's true that your style is very relaxed but I think you should not repeat
"Maybe it's time to try,
Get up, get out, get moving,
Do stuff you might enjoy"

I get the feeling that it would be better without that repetition, I hope you do not bother with me for telling you this. Apart from this appreciation of mine, your song has entertained me so much that I have not even noticed the mix, but what can I say, it also sounds so personal.  ::thumb::
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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