• New song "V toy den" (That day)
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New song "V toy den" (That day)
on: June 14, 2019, 16:16:38
Today recorded a new song. While demo recording. Enjoy listening )
https://soundcloud.com/yuriy-shatunski/v-toy-den
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Re: New song "V toy den" (That day)
Reply #1 on: June 15, 2019, 12:37:32
Sad ballad, at least that's what your voice sounds although I do not understand the lyrics. Good mix as always @shatiks
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Re: New song "V toy den" (That day)
Reply #2 on: June 15, 2019, 16:45:23
@shatiks  - fine ballad. My tip would be to lower the strings a bit , add some percussion and keep out the second vocals around and after 1.40.
Cheers, super songwriting for sure
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Re: New song "V toy den" (That day)
Reply #3 on: June 16, 2019, 18:30:25
I enjoyed your ballad @shatiks . The build in dynamics is a good idea; as @oorlab  said, you might need to rein in the strings initially.
The vocal has feeling and held my attention without understanding the lyrics - I do think a translation would be helpful though.
The falsetto vocal passage is good!

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Re: New song "V toy den" (That day)
Reply #4 on: June 16, 2019, 21:25:25
Yes! You are right friends! It is necessary to make some changes in the modulation. This version is more for female vocals. It's hard for me to sing in high register.Before breaking voices in childhood -I would do it better. ) The violins sing too high :doublebonk:


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Re: New song "V toy den" (That day)
Reply #5 on: June 17, 2019, 07:50:56
Nice one!
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