• One Epiphany Short ('Magic Words' Challenge)
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Re: One Epiphany Short ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #15 on: May 06, 2019, 02:07:09
The lyrics have a style that I like and I have tasted and reread calmly, envisioning the images. I have not found any word that was not adjusted to the story and that is wealth.
It has been a great pleasure to read it.

Thank you for your kind words about the music @Mora Amaro La Loba , but for me this song is all about @DonMar 's amazing lyrics.  That is what has been behind my foolish "X"-ness in her thread. These lyrics hold up wonderfully on their own....even in the light of the challenges of this Challenge.  ;)
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Re: One Epiphany Short ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #16 on: May 08, 2019, 20:48:26
A dictionary! A kingdom (or at least a horse) for a dictionary!!  ;D ;D ;D
Just kidding, got most of it actually.
Quality stuff all the way from lyrics/writing to performance and production.
Yummy guitars, me like!
Well done, both of you!
Let man's petty nations tear themselves apart
My land's only borders lie around my heart


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Re: One Epiphany Short ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #17 on: May 08, 2019, 23:20:32
@Jambrains ....thanks so much for checking this one out. Yeah... @DonMar definitely put together some very cool lyrics for this one.

Yummy guitars, me like!

From you, man...that has me smiling.  :)


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Re: One Epiphany Short ('Magic Words' Challenge)
Reply #18 on: May 17, 2019, 16:30:05
Finally the "X-factor" is revealed.

 ::headphone:: Now that's a hard to beat lyrics for this challenge @DonMar , and a very inventive one as such. That certainly puts some pressure on the rest of us...   ;D

I dunno which artist has made more songs, the great Bob or the great @Leonard Scaper and who cares, as long as the songs are of this quality.

This is a "sway along arms-connected" type of song, like the arranging and especially the stops that adds to this feel of sing-along arm in arm, and the melody is very catchy - I've only listened once and the melody from the chorus stuck (...and I forget easily...might be age-related ;-) ) ...think that says it.

Great collab by the both of you  ::trumpet::  :praise:

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