one heart whole

wrote this years ago
a friend picked it out from many of my past songs and said it was good.
The song has some sentimental value for me, I think this new production does it justice.




https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/one-heart-whole-1


lyrics

One Heart Whole


 there's a warm breeze
and many ways to survive
 take your worries
and hang them out to dry
hear me if I'm not mistaken
 forgive me all I know
many loves must be forsaken
 to make just one heart whole
 to make just one heart whole

 your wily ways
all these secrets and lies
should have no place
in your heart or mine
 any thorn can be misleading
and discolour the rose
left alone, distraught and needy
 leave me any- anything but broke
 to make just one heart whole

drop all defense, discard pretense,
relinquish resistance, be still

hear me if I'm not mistaken
 forgive me all I know
many loves must be forsaken
 to make just one heart whole
 to make just one heart whole

 there's a warm breeze
and many ways to survive


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rightly

Listening in the studio on good headphones. I love how the drums work with the other instrumentation to create a very cool dynamic flow.

These lyrics are.....typically riveting. You really know how to make your listener....listen.

Thanks for the feedback
@Leonard Scaper !

Reminds me of Gary numan