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one heart whole
on: April 07, 2021, 18:12:40
wrote this years ago
a friend picked it out from many of my past songs and said it was good.
The song has some sentimental value for me, I think this new production does it justice.




https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/one-heart-whole-1


lyrics


One Heart Whole


 there's a warm breeze
and many ways to survive
 take your worries
and hang them out to dry
hear me if I'm not mistaken
 forgive me all I know
many loves must be forsaken
 to make just one heart whole
 to make just one heart whole

 your wily ways
all these secrets and lies
should have no place
in your heart or mine
 any thorn can be misleading
and discolour the rose
left alone, distraught and needy
 leave me any- anything but broke
 to make just one heart whole

drop all defense, discard pretense,
relinquish resistance, be still

hear me if I'm not mistaken
 forgive me all I know
many loves must be forsaken
 to make just one heart whole
 to make just one heart whole

 there's a warm breeze
and many ways to survive


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rightly



Re: one heart whole
Reply #1 on: April 08, 2021, 01:20:31
Listening in the studio on good headphones. I love how the drums work with the other instrumentation to create a very cool dynamic flow.

These lyrics are.....typically riveting. You really know how to make your listener....listen.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

Lenny's Tunes: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=540680

https://soundcloud.com/vincentgleason


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Re: one heart whole
Reply #2 on: April 12, 2021, 15:26:41
Thanks for the feedback
@Leonard Scaper !


Re: one heart whole
Reply #3 on: April 14, 2021, 18:54:21
Reminds me of Gary numan  ::thumb::
Mskingnco🎶🌹💝



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