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Out of Box
on: January 06, 2021, 00:26:05
Good evening!

We should do the things as they come, or?
I just finished my first song of 2021 :D
Tried to spend some extra attention to the EQ but stopped when i realized first signs of total damaging... I just hope you maybe like it at it is though.
Any comments and thoughts are welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/user-65096772/out-of-box

Out of Box

Smooth walls I feel
gray walls I see
edges edges
uniformity

On the walls
gray as rocks
on the walls
gray as rocks
on the walls
ticking clocks

Closed lid I feel
small gap I see
edges edges
couriosity

Climbing high
ticking clocks
climbing high
ticking clocks
My think
falls out
the box

Loose bounds I feel
far space Isee
no edges  no edges
just infinity




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Re: Out of Box
Reply #1 on: January 06, 2021, 00:32:01
@Mo   - immediate like - that is some quite fast guitar fingerpicking going on. Has a Spanish feel to it.
The beat when it comes in, is strong - but not too overpowering.
Interesting how the word Edges at some point sounds like Ages.
Should be really nice to play this with a live band.
new guitar 4-6-2020 https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/12string-demo1 12string Cort.


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Re: Out of Box
Reply #2 on: January 06, 2021, 00:40:23
Aw, thank you for fast reply!! ::heart::

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Should be really nice to play this with a live band

I'm quite sure, that i just can dream about  8)

Anyway... hope for maybe another online-collab this year with you  @oorlab :D, was great fun to me!

Ages would maybe fit also at one part ::thumb::


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Re: Out of Box
Reply #3 on: January 06, 2021, 09:29:57
I like
this works, different elements,
and they surprised me one after the other!

I realllly like your boldness!


Re: Out of Box
Reply #4 on: January 06, 2021, 14:44:42
I'm with @rightly ...this is fantastically bold. I love it.
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Re: Out of Box
Reply #5 on: January 06, 2021, 21:23:53
Hola hola @Mo
Your first song for 2021 it has a rhythm that is being composed, like a puzzle, piece by piece until it catches me ...
Good colors, good style changes, very interesting work. I think you could be more daring with your voice when you sing in a higher tone, I'm sure you could with a more continuous melody ... But that's my taste, nothing more, I'm telling you because I like your voice, it's very different , it can be an instrument when you feel that way.
Olé, that  unexpected Spanish guitar!!!

Muchos besos  ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::

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Re: Out of Box
Reply #6 on: January 06, 2021, 21:46:57
Thank you, thank you @rightly @Leonard Scaper , that's very nice you said that! I'm sure the great mentoring here is what makes me feel comfortable for it. :D

Hola hola @Mo I think you could be more daring with your voice when you sing in a higher tone,
I appreciate your advice Mora!
Well, to be honest, singing in a higher tone is still an obstacle..... its very exhausting for me and my voice. My vocal teacher insisted to work at that either  to give me a technique that it will be more and more easier to do... but i hadn't any lessons since spring last year due covid and now she moved away and we can't have lessons anymore. I don't want take the risk do it just by my own.
My voice, in fact my whole upper respiratory system is very fragile and gets damaged very quickly. I have noticed that in the last few months. I need to be carefull.
Although i promise to keep that still in mind an on my agenda for 2021! Thank you for your thoughts! ::heart:: ::heart::


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Re: Out of Box
Reply #7 on: January 07, 2021, 22:36:27
 :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

ah...  :dance: :dance: your new track is awesome @Mo 

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Re: Out of Box
Reply #8 on: January 07, 2021, 23:38:53
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

ah...  :dance: :dance: your new track is awesome @Mo

 :D Thank you my friend for listen! Your comments worth all work!!


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Re: Out of Box
Reply #9 on: January 14, 2021, 18:20:05
Good evening!

We should do the things as they come, or?
I just finished my first song of 2021 :D
Tried to spend some extra attention to the EQ but stopped when i realized first signs of total damaging... I just hope you maybe like it at it is though.
Any comments and thoughts are welcome!

https://soundcloud.com/user-65096772/out-of-box

Out of Box

Smooth walls I feel
gray walls I see
edges edges
uniformity

On the walls
gray as rocks
on the walls
gray as rocks
on the walls
ticking clocks

Closed lid I feel
small gap I see
edges edges
couriosity

Climbing high
ticking clocks
climbing high
ticking clocks
My think
falls out
the box

Loose bounds I feel
far space Isee
no edges  no edges
just infinity

Cool track loving your use of instruments pretty unique  :ok:




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