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Perfect Girl
on: July 09, 2015, 19:14:18
« Last Edit: July 10, 2015, 17:17:41 by gilmourStrat »
https://soundcloud.com/michael-hall-15/perfect-girl

Yeah, I'm not a singer :)

Lyrics..

I never thought I'd meet you girl
A perfect girl that's perfect for me...
I never knew about you girl
A perfect girl that's perfect for me...

I always thought there's only loneliness
And no one to ever fill this emptiness
my life would always be so meaningless
Until I saw her there and a love we both could share

I never thought I'd meet you girl
A perfect girl and perfect for me...
I never knew about you girl
A perfect girl and perfect for me...

On the day we met we were so in love
And the days to come were all we were thinking of
I love here and every little thing she does
and I'm so glad she mine and I tell her all the time

That's the way I'll always feel about her
I could never really live without her
Noooooooooooooooooooooooo......

Now everyday it'll be just the two of us
and the time we share will never be enough
cause I found a girl and she's the loveliest
and I'm so glad she mine and I tell her all the time

That's the way I'll always feel about her
I could never really live without her
Noooooooooooooooooooooooo......
 


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Re: Perfect Girl
Reply #1 on: July 09, 2015, 23:18:02
Actually, I think you are a singer  :)

You have one of these voices that can sing off key, yet still maintain the flow of the song......

The real problem here is the recording and production issues.... too many to list, but if you can tidy up the keybs - the editing is painful to the ear in places - this has all the ingredients for a great pop song...  Great verses, awesome key changes, bridges and chorus....

If you could get this to "broadcast quality" then this is an excellent song  :)


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Re: Perfect Girl
Reply #2 on: July 10, 2015, 09:35:36
cool tune sung with a lot of passion!

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Re: Perfect Girl
Reply #3 on: July 10, 2015, 17:26:56
Thanks for the encouragement!!!!  I'm afraid to sing. I just plug the mic straight in with no effects and record.

I recorded this by myself on a Yamaha 1600 machine. I, obviously, suck at recording but love to write. Most of my songs are just recorded on my iPhone -  I literally have hundreds of recordings that I haven't tried to record yet.

If anyone wants to collaborate I'd be very happy to write.

I'll try to make my next recording better quality.

Thank you...


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Re: Perfect Girl
Reply #4 on: July 11, 2015, 00:03:31
I completely agree with your sentiments viz "I, obviously, suck at recording but love to write."  This is an issue for many songwriters, but being part of this forum and listening and interacting with other songwriters - you will find the inspiration to work on your production technique - and it will improve.  I'm talking from personal experience... I hate Logic / Garageband with a vengeance and am at my happiest sitting at the piano with my iPhone and Recorder app... BUT, i've kicked my ass and now spend more and more time using the software to convert my rough demo's into pretty good quality songs :-)




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