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perforated nights
on: December 19, 2020, 13:20:16
Hi all!!
great to be here!!

I had a lot of fun writing this a while back
Maybe ten months ago

Feedback, critique very welcome!!

Link.

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/perforted-nights



Lyrics:

perforated nights


I just don't know, what would I do?
if ever I lost the will to deliver
the very best to you
and I don't care, that's what they'd say
never one to follow the river
'less it runs my way
and it's all true
I'd only run, skip and jump for you

well okay, it's alright
bring on them perforated nights

'house and garden, a dirty doting wife
we'd knuckle down when things get hard and
we'd live a tin-foil life
is that too much, or not enough?
better men succumb to these ashes
to ashes, dust to dust
these ruins though
hostile and barren, still belong to us

well okay, it's alright
bring on them perforated nights
and in the heart of darkness
we'll be sure to see the light



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Re: perforated nights
Reply #1 on: December 19, 2020, 16:42:34
aaahh @rightly, that sounds good  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: great song and arrangment  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: perforated nights
Reply #2 on: December 20, 2020, 12:19:15

I love the sound and the arrangement, the pizzicatos? they always get that special touch ...
Your lyrics are raw, unadorned and bare the truth, but wrapped in this sound it doesn't hurt @rightly

Que pases bonitas Navidades.

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Re: perforated nights
Reply #3 on: December 21, 2020, 00:21:06
Glad you had fun making this.
You are a nice crooner indeed. Your voice hearkens back to  Roy Orbison for me.
Nice!


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Re: perforated nights
Reply #4 on: December 25, 2020, 10:28:32
Glad you had fun making this.
You are a nice crooner indeed. Your voice hearkens back to  Roy Orbison for me.
Nice!

Thanks Timothy
I've been compared to Roy before, might be a favourite comparison.
I really enjoyed recording this. Writing it was one of those songs only meant for myself.
I'm happy to present it though!


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Re: perforated nights
Reply #5 on: December 25, 2020, 11:32:31
Hi!
I think i remember that lyrics from a former post of yours! Very cool to hear it now with that very nicely arranged sound, I like it :)



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