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please could you give me your thoughts
on: April 14, 2021, 18:47:41
« Last Edit: April 15, 2021, 14:32:38 by Ms King »
   hi, ive been holding back on posting this song, I dont know why, its out of my comfort zone,  ive mixed and mastered it, my vocals seem to be
   ok.

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I wrote the lyrics based on the movie Utopia, and with everything thats been going on in the world today.
   im not sure about the content, oh god, Im so unsure about music.... lol
   MK

https://soundcloud.com/mskingofficial/utpoia-rush-3-15-21-424-pm/s-vsz1EK8ds40

    UTOPIA RUSH

Somethings in Life Not fair
so why you trying to pull me there
I can give it over to you
but thats not what im gonna do
fall me with all ya charms
bring down all the  alarms
say what you think is true
im not a believer in you

step in line if you must
step in line if you must
step in line
who ready for the utopia Rush

I gotta be straight with you
 Im not a believer its true
think you found a cure
roll up your sleeve if your sure

step inline if you must
ready for the utopia rush
so you think you have found a cure
pull out a rabbit are you sure
fool me with all your charms
break down all the alarms
and say what you think is true
Im not a believer in you

step in line if you must
step in line if you must
step in line
who ready for the utopia Rush

I gotta be straight with you
 Im not a believer its true
think you found a cure
roll up your sleeve if your sure


step in line if you must
utopia Rust
utopia Rush

so you think you have found a cure
pull out a rabbit are you sure
come on take me if you must
only one place i put my trust.

Regards King




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Re: please could you give me your thoughts
Reply #1 on: April 14, 2021, 19:02:44
hi, ive been holding back on posting this song, I dont know why, its out of my comfort zone,  ive mixed and mastered it, my vocals seem to be ok.
im not sure about the content, oh god, Im so unsure about music.... lol
MK ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::

https://soundcloud.com/mskingofficial/utpoia-rush-3-15-21-424-pm/s-vsz1EK8ds40


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Reply #2 on: April 14, 2021, 19:46:39
Ahhhh..., how very clever of you! Youíve made your own fanclub. To be able to answer to your own post. (Smiley!!!)

I like it a lot. Your song. And you are right. No reason to have doubts about your voice.

This has all the characteristics of shoe gaze. Everything directed at energy and noise. Great! Very English.
Thatís what I make as a rule. Voice drowned in the mix/instruments. And a voice is just an instrument.

I think you can already see the outline of where Iím going:
If you donít intend to do shoe gaze, then there is some kudos/points to be won with a mix that leaves some more room for the voice.

And may I please ask if you would post the lyrics? There are people here from all over the world. And I am one of them and would be glad if I could read along.

I like the energy a lot and the moments where the backing pick up again without the bass.
Tomorrow I have good headphones and I promise to be back for a good listen.
Love it already!
Keep on keepin on, as Curtis Mayfield used to say.
Kind regards, Gus


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Reply #3 on: April 14, 2021, 20:56:24
As soon as I heard the organ intro I knew I was going to like this. This is an awesome track! A modern take on something that kicked off in the 60's. I cannot possibly fault this as I love everything about it. Great vocals and equally good instrumentation. Made my day.. :)


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Reply #4 on: April 14, 2021, 21:14:48
@Ms King This is cool. Made me move. I'd love to see the lyrics if possible... thanks for sharing.
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Re: please could you give me your thoughts
Reply #5 on: April 14, 2021, 23:26:05
I wouldn't be shy at all to share this @Ms King ! Music and production sounds great imo!
The vocals are awesome, but for me there not 'glued' in the mix (enough) to make a coherent package. Could be the use of the microphone, the eq-ing on the vocals or an effect I tend to hear (don't know what effect exactly). But apart from that I really enjoyed listening!! Thanks for sharing with us!
Cheers, Love and Peace,
Mar T.
:mart:

PS I was not able to give this track a 'like' because it was 'private'.
I'm proud of this track, check it out! https://soundcloud.com/martimedia/dreams


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Reply #6 on: April 15, 2021, 14:41:12
« Last Edit: April 16, 2021, 10:28:27 by Ms King »
Ahhhh..., how very clever of you! Youíve made your own fanclub. To be able to answer to your own post. (Smiley!!!)

I like it a lot. Your song. And you are right. No reason to have doubts about your voice.

This has all the characteristics of shoe gaze. Everything directed at energy and noise. Great! Very English.
Thatís what I make as a rule. Voice drowned in the mix/instruments. And a voice is just an instrument.

I think you can already see the outline of where Iím going:
If you donít intend to do shoe gaze, then there is some kudos/points to be won with a mix that leaves some more room for the voice.

And may I please ask if you would post the lyrics? There are people here from all over the world. And I am one of them and would be glad if I could read along.

I like the energy a lot and the moments where the backing pick up again without the bass.
Tomorrow I have good headphones and I promise to be back for a good listen.
Love it already!
Keep on keepin on, as Curtis Mayfield used to say.
Kind regards, Gus
  ::heart::

Hi Gus, Im not sure if I should press Quote to reply  :yes: I hope so, Thank you for your response, What  is shoe gaze?, ::smiley:: Im happy and delighted that you like it. thank you. King


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Reply #7 on: April 15, 2021, 14:45:16
As soon as I heard the organ intro I knew I was going to like this. This is an awesome track! A modern take on something that kicked off in the 60's. I cannot possibly fault this as I love everything about it. Great vocals and equally good instrumentation. Made my day.. :)

Hello there Mr Price, Thank you, YOU made my day to, very grateful   ::heart::


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Reply #8 on: April 15, 2021, 14:46:56
@Ms King This is cool. Made me move. I'd love to see the lyrics if possible... thanks for sharing.

Hey Mr Hynes, Lyrics, Thank you, have a great week  ::heart::


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Reply #9 on: April 15, 2021, 14:53:17
I wouldn't be shy at all to share this @Ms King ! Music and production sounds great imo!
The vocals are awesome, but for me there not 'glued' in the mix (enough) to make a coherent package. Could be the use of the microphone, the eq-ing on the vocals or an effect I tend to hear (don't know what effect exactly). But apart from that I really enjoyed listening!! Thanks for sharing with us!
Cheers, Love and Peace,
Mar T.
:mart:

oohe a tecky eh,  :praise:Thats really observant of you, you are indeed right, I did have a Rhode on this, to be honest, I wasn't happy with it at all  :lol:
I got myself a new mic, I need it on an Acoustic EP Im writing.
Thank you Mat  ::heart::

PS I was not able to give this track a 'like' because it was 'private'.


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Reply #10 on: April 15, 2021, 15:32:29
Spain already got into your blood @Ms King !
Dream pop
Cocteau Twins - Elisabeth Fraser*
This mortal coil*
Bat for lashes

Evolved into Shoegaze
Lush*
Mazzy star
Piroshki*
My bloody Valentine *
Diiv

And I believe that Diiv is the only non English band

Plus one of the best albums in my house jezus and Mary chain - just like candy
Dream pop 80ís - shoe gaze 90ís

Most bands are on 4AD.
*indicates my favourites.
Although I have critical things to say now and then, I would never write something to spite you.
My music is shoe gaze minus the pedals and distortion.

Kind regards, Gus



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Reply #11 on: April 15, 2021, 20:39:59
Spain already got into your blood @Ms King !
Dream pop
Cocteau Twins - Elisabeth Fraser*
This mortal coil*
Bat for lashes

Evolved into Shoegaze
Lush*
Mazzy star
Piroshki*
My bloody Valentine *
Diiv

And I believe that Diiv is the only non English band

Plus one of the best albums in my house jezus and Mary chain - just like candy
Dream pop 80ís - shoe gaze 90ís

Most bands are on 4AD.
*indicates my favourites.
Although I have critical things to say now and then, I would never write something to spite you.
My music is shoe gaze minus the pedals and distortion.

Kind regards, Gus

Such a lot to chew ma friend
I will surely check some of them out Gus  ::heart::


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Reply #12 on: April 15, 2021, 23:22:41
seriously funky! Loving the Motown drive in the beat.
The chord change at
"I gotta be straight with you  Im not a believer its true" is cool.
Songwritingwise its top, mixwise there could be some things to try out, as  @Mar T.  mentioned.

@LePlongeur
- big fan of Cocteau Twins & This Mortal Coil here too. But in @Ms King King 's Utopia Rush I am not hearing a shoegaze 4AD song (yet) - but will listen again.


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Reply #13 on: April 16, 2021, 10:18:36
Ahhhh..., how very clever of you! Youíve made your own fanclub. To be able to answer to your own post. (Smiley!!!)

I like it a lot. Your song. And you are right. No reason to have doubts about your voice.

This has all the characteristics of shoe gaze. Everything directed at energy and noise. Great! Very English.
Thatís what I make as a rule. Voice drowned in the mix/instruments. And a voice is just an instrument.

I think you can already see the outline of where Iím going:
If you donít intend to do shoe gaze, then there is some kudos/points to be won with a mix that leaves some more room for the voice.

And may I please ask if you would post the lyrics? There are people here from all over the world. And I am one of them and would be glad if I could read along.

I like the energy a lot and the moments where the backing pick up again without the bass.
Tomorrow I have good headphones and I promise to be back for a good listen.
Love it already!
Keep on keepin on, as Curtis Mayfield used to say.
Kind regards, Gus
  ::heart:: Hi Gus, Im not sure if I should press Quote to reply  :yes: I hope so, Thank you for your response, Im not sure what shue gaze means, but it sounds American to me  ::smiley:: Im happy and delighted that you look it. thank you. King

Thank you 🎶#Gus you have now educated me on Shoegaze 🧐&Dreampop it was so cool to listen to some of the bands you named above.
It also opened my thoughts to when mixing and mastering
Thank you.🙏


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Re: please could you give me your thoughts
Reply #14 on: April 17, 2021, 11:30:24
« Last Edit: April 17, 2021, 11:41:32 by Mylene »
hello @Ms King
there is so much positive energy in your song! I have been caught in it since the beginning of the track.
You have a great voice and this funky vibe makes me want to dance  :dance:
Well done!



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