Prisoner of tonight rough recorded band demo

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https://soundcloud.com/fischermans100/prisoner-of-tonight-bandmp3

very nice, relaxed atmosphere in the bass, and a very nice song

when you have this pause, as in: you are a prisoner of ..............tonight, i think you should not hear a single note (of the guitar) in between, so hit "tonight" with bass and guitar at the same time

very cool track, nice lead bits of the guitar too

I like the foundation for you've got in this demo.  My first reaction is "this track needs more percussion" but I get that it's a rough demo.  Also, given the rough nature of the recording, it's not easy to follow the lyrics.  I like the dirty guitar solo that kicks in around the 3 minute mark. 

Hi Fisch,

I agree with DB; I think there would be more impact without those lead in notes before you sing "tonight."
I think the bass sound could be brought out more, and the backing vocals.
As Andrew mentioned - the lyrics are a bit unclear at the minute.
The lead guitar cuts through nicely.

Look forward to hearing how the mix progresses.

Digger