• SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
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SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
on: October 12, 2018, 08:39:56
« Last Edit: October 12, 2018, 08:41:39 by TheMobRapper »
Here's my submission to the same lyric challenge! @MichaelA I hope you enjoy my rendition of your lyrics! And yup, it's my awful vocals covering it. Sorry for the cringe, it was just easier this way.

https://soundcloud.com/user-331798352/two-hearts-in-the-snow-same-lyric-challenge

P.S. Are these lyrics copyright-free? I just want to upload it to Spotify and YouTube. I can credit you, of course!
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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #1 on: October 12, 2018, 10:50:56
Hi @TheMobRapper , well this is a very moody and assured interpretation of this lyric set. I did enjoy it, especially the hypnotic counter melody of the synths, which build in a skilful way to add real drama to the song.

I thought you used your vocal well, and it wasn't the poor performance you pre-warned about. They really added something to the mood.

I have no problem you publishing these lyrics on your normal channels. Only if you end up doing a duet with Beyoncé or selling it as the next Bond Movie theme, etc, would I expect to talk split royalties! Modest earnings are not worth discussing, so no probs!
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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #2 on: October 12, 2018, 22:32:50
@TheMobRapper  - liking the combinatiopn of mix and vocals. Enough sort of autotune effect to still keep the emotional spark alight. It has a snowy feel. Much enjoyed after 2 listens.
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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #3 on: October 14, 2018, 14:50:56
hi @TheMobRapper (and @MichaelA) ,  cool entry for this songwriting challenge  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::
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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #4 on: November 07, 2018, 14:03:06
Blimey mate, you buy yer autotune in bulk! But it sounds alright, like robots in love in the snow.
I liked the clockwork robotic sound of the vocal with the dark synth backing.
It sounded quite bleak, like they didn't have a happy ending. Maybe too much autotune and not enough antifreeze.  ;D


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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #5 on: November 08, 2018, 22:26:19
Hey @TheMobRapper , well done! Normally I'm not too fond of auto-tuning effects, but in this case it works really well (imo) as a creative effect to blend with the synth work.. Nice instrumental as well! Soo cool to hear all these songs with the same lyrics, each one compLETEly different..
Thanks for joining the challenge and sharing your results!! Enjoyed listening!
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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #6 on: November 09, 2018, 02:28:40
This is really cool @TheMobRapper:)
It's such dark, post-apocalyptic, dystopian kind of feel! Android-ian coolness to the ninth degree my friend.  :) I keep listening to this one.
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Re: SAME LYRIC CHALLENGE - Two Hearts in the Snow
Reply #7 on: November 15, 2018, 11:44:24
You have a beautiful voice!   ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
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