• Same Old Place
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Same Old Place
on: July 21, 2015, 20:48:23
https://soundcloud.com/jezmund-2/same-old-place-1



Here we are meeting again
I had a new approach
But Honesty and empathy
Were met with your reproach

I remember our first meeting
I wasn?t nearly so understanding
I laid down the law and overall
Was much too demanding

There may be no original sins
But there are things
We wish we could change
Neither of us wants to run for cover
or feel estranged

Yet here we are
back at the same old place, my friend
wondering if we should be honest
or just pretend again
Sometimes, it?s hard
To know where to begin
When all we?ve said to get in our heads
Just goes to waste
Here at the same old place

I hesitate even to call
Afraid you will make short stories long
Our shared past cannot outlast
Our insistence the other is wrong

Second chances never come
When trust is swept away
So here we reside on opposite sides
Struggling to make it through each day

There may be no original sins
But there are things
We wish we could change
Neither of us wants to run for cover
or feel estranged


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Re: Same Old Place
Reply #1 on: July 21, 2015, 21:04:09
cool songwriting  8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)
i think


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Re: Same Old Place
Reply #2 on: July 21, 2015, 21:29:01
Hey Andrew Jezmund

I liked listening to your song! It's good, the lead vox as well as the backing vocals. Really nice.

Only at one point the guitar starts to enoy me. A bit to much strumming for my taste.  :D ;)

But overall it has a nice warm possitive vibe!

Great!

BdK

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Re: Same Old Place
Reply #3 on: July 21, 2015, 23:27:19
I agree on the guitars.  There are several points where I strum the strings with too much force.  I was just too lazy to re-record it. 

Thanks for the feedback folks!


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Re: Same Old Place
Reply #4 on: July 21, 2015, 23:41:23
Hello Andrew
I'm 100% sure you will receive more feedback to your songs if you review more of your fellow members songs. A forum is always a give and take thing. The more you give, the more you shall receive. ;)
Your song is good.I do not agree with the things about the guitar playing.I like your strum on this. Only your singing is a bit overpowered imo. Your words are always in front of the music.If you slow them down you can sing better along the music. Also I suggest to shorten the song .
Alexander



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