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Donít Say Just Pay
on: March 24, 2018, 13:34:51
(This song it is for a female vocalist) This is an instrumental song a melody for the vocalist to sing, Below is the lyric. Kindly give me your thoughts on the song over all.



Donít Say Just Pay
© 2018 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(1st Verse)
You said youíll buy me, everything fancy
Take me to the Caribbean weíll have fun, there ainít no doubt
But you never tell me, how much you care
You never tell me, how much you care

(Pre Chorus)
Well, Iím taking you down town going shopping
At a jewelry store youíll be buying, I donít want to hear a thing

(Chorus)
Donít say just pay just pay donít say, buy me a wedding ring
Just pay donít say donít say just pay, buy me a wedding ring

(2nd Verse)
You said youíll take me, me out on Fridays
Itís only one time a week you Iíll see, not those other days
And you never tell me that you love me
You never tell me that you love me

(Pre Chorus)
Well, Iím taking you down town going shopping
At a jewelry store youíll be buying, I donít want to hear a thing

(Chorus)
Donít say just pay just pay donít say, buy me a wedding ring
Just pay donít say donít say just pay, buy me a wedding ring

(Bridge)
If you love me say you love me If you donít you got to let me know
If you donít love me donít come around me anymore
Leave me alone

(3rd verse)
You never said you wanna get marry
Wanna raise a family here you come, say the same things
Unnecessary words is what I donít want to be hearing
I donít wanna hear a thing, donít wanna hear anything


(Chorus)
Just pay donít say donít say just pay, buy me a wedding ring
Donít say just pay just pay donít say, buy me a wedding ring
(Repeat)


Re: Donít Say Just Pay
Reply #1 on: March 24, 2018, 23:47:55
interesting sunny vibe. Not exactly reggae, - may be dance hall. Could really work well with a real saxophone.
The lyrics have a funny narrative.
Good luck with further explorations of the song
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: Donít Say Just Pay
Reply #2 on: March 26, 2018, 11:33:08
Yes Oorlab, I am in search of someone play the lead saxophone on my song. Thank you very much for the feedback.

Irwin



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