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shell fish
on: November 05, 2019, 16:09:41
happy fall time - i hope you like it.

https://soundcloud.com/aesthetique/shell-fish?in=aesthetique/sets/firefly

words:
Give me my head and play me
Give me all of your crazy
Give me all of your time

Give me that cloudy, hazy
Gimme, I love it, baby


Tell me I donít know whatís for real
Tell me I donít know how you feel
Tell me everything you want
Iíll give you everything you want

We both know whatís true, Moon
You make me feel brand new, Moon
Iíll always be on your side
I feel so alive Ė ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Give me everything youíre holding back
Iíll give you my heart still intact
Here, now.

Together Ė bored and lazy
Gimme, I love it, baby


let me slide inside you
Spread you wide - divide you
tell me everything you want
Iíll give you everything you want

We both know whatís true, moon
You make me feel brand new, moon
Iíll always be on your side
I feel so alive Ė ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy


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Re: shell fish
Reply #1 on: November 09, 2019, 05:14:40
It took some extra listens to get used to it.
But I've come to believe in it.
A slightly Bonzo Dog Doo Dah-ish riff and a stoned singer...., why not?
The further you stray from the Middle Of The Road, the more chance to aleniate your audience, but I am convinced.

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Re: shell fish
Reply #2 on: November 09, 2019, 05:24:58
Right on bro - thank you


Re: shell fish
Reply #3 on: November 09, 2019, 16:12:19
That was really cool, man. The mood is so nice. I would like to highlight the horn section. It gave so much power to your song. Well done!


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Reply #4 on: November 12, 2019, 09:41:43
Hello, i heard your song a few times and in a whole it makes sense to me.
The subject spread the mood been 'drunken of been fall in love or  'dreaming about  love while sleeping'.
I like the accents at 'true moon' ; 'new moon'.
Just the line 'Together Ė bored and lazy' sounds a bit confusing to me in that other context ;)
The outgoing of the songs  to me sounds  nicley arrranged.
:-)


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Reply #5 on: November 18, 2019, 22:38:58
Hi @thewinefestival

I really like the piano intro and that riff that plays throughout.

The horns work well as well.

The vocals are a bit to loud in the mix for me and take a bit of getting used to. At first it sounds like they belong to a different song but then they kind of work (for me).

It would be interesting to hear the vocals mixed back a little it.

The guitar at the end is great!

cheers


Re: shell fish
Reply #6 on: November 19, 2019, 22:15:31
Hola @thewinefestival

Sincerely your song I don't think it leaves anyone indifferent. I still don't know how to catalog it and that's fine, I like the differences.
You have an unusual color singing lyrics full of imaginative possibilities.
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: shell fish
Reply #7 on: November 28, 2019, 00:11:12
Yeah , @thewinefestival  , maybe this time you went a little too far with the vocals ..... but , dang, they sound way more modern than the last time! I can hear you've been working on getting the voice to cut through the mix.
Cool concept.
Cool song.
I like it.
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.



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