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Silhouette Man Acoustic
on: May 19, 2020, 11:10:10
Hello all

About to record a full version for this song, any useful feedback or criticism would be great thanks.




Re: Silhouette Man Acoustic
Reply #1 on: May 19, 2020, 13:09:34
Hello @muso1070 ........this sounds really good in my studio headphones. I really like the way you are playing and how your voice rides just right over it.

Not sure what you have in mind for a full production but I am hearing a bass guitar anchoring things and maybe just spreading that nice guitar out to give your voice even more room. I'd be keeping this one pretty sparse though.

Nice little intimate interlude a there at around 3:50.

I'm hearing some occasional minor clicking that is likely associated with the guitar.

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.....that next tune up (Open Road) is really good production. Some electric guitar like that could find its way into this tune as well.  ;)
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Re: Silhouette Man Acoustic
Reply #2 on: May 19, 2020, 17:15:45
hi @muso1070   :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: that sounds good! nice vocal  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


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Re: Silhouette Man Acoustic
Reply #3 on: Yesterday at 14:06:14
Hello thanks for this yes definitely excited to start recording the studio versin soon be keeping it stripped back indeed. Less is always more as they say. Thank you I'll get a good look around  :thumbsup:


Hello @muso1070 ........this sounds really good in my studio headphones. I really like the way you are playing and how your voice rides just right over it.

Not sure what you have in mind for a full production but I am hearing a bass guitar anchoring things and maybe just spreading that nice guitar out to give your voice even more room. I'd be keeping this one pretty sparse though.

Nice little intimate interlude a there at around 3:50.

I'm hearing some occasional minor clicking that is likely associated with the guitar.

Welcome to The Kitchen! Take a look around and see what others are up to. I'm betting something might resonate with you.

.....that next tune up (Open Road) is really good production. Some electric guitar like that could find its way into this tune as well.  ;)


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Re: Silhouette Man Acoustic
Reply #4 on: Yesterday at 14:11:38
Hey thank you and for the warm welcome  :D :thumbsup:

hi @muso1070   :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: that sounds good! nice vocal  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


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Re: Silhouette Man Acoustic
Reply #5 on: Yesterday at 14:36:35
Hi @muso1070  ….. Welcome to the kitchen! Very happy to have you here!

Good quality stuff, there. Very calming and beautiful. Very nice and emotive performance.

Only criticism I can give is I notice around 3 minutes or so ( as a new listener to your music) I kind of felt lost or bored a bit. But … I'm pretty confident that a full arrangement of this song can completely take care of that.

Good luck with your production! Keep us posted and of course feel free to look around and join in the fun here.  :ok:

Good show!

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