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Offline tuff bransch

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Re: Skin (demo)
« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2017, 14:58:26 »
thanx @denizensdeep !

@M57 thank you!

i hear a full setting with mellow drums, bass, guitar and maby a cello playing the humming parts and some pads in the background
in my head.

about the lyrics. your the second person reacting to how different the verses is from the choruses. i think ill fix it with a bridge into the chorus
making the ride a bit more understandable. the verses are too subtle but my love for her is in there somewhere.. or at least i hope.

by the way, i once tried to sing elton johns rocket man. checked up the lyrics and everything. i found the lyrics superwierd to sing yet when he sings it it sounds so very natural.

and yes. to me the last part of the last verse.

>or somehow keep them out of sight

is the worst part. was really scratching my head to come up with something there that actually meant something. advice are welcome!
there are some other places where the words are a little squeezed in there but i think ill leave most of it. 

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Re: Skin (demo)
« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2017, 12:45:37 »
updated with a kitchen session added to the original post... :)

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Re: Skin (demo)
« Reply #17 on: August 12, 2017, 21:51:12 »
Great song! Well done man!


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