• Song Ritual (Ритуал)
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Song Ritual (Ритуал)
on: August 26, 2019, 22:58:16
New song for You ) a little minimalism and more vocals
https://soundcloud.com/yuriy-shatunski/ritual
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Re: Song Ritual (Ритуал)
Reply #1 on: September 10, 2019, 23:27:53
sounds good - jazzy feel. The intro somehow seems a bit detached from the rest. Saxophone could work well.
Looking forward @shatiks to read your comments on other songs and your new posts off course.
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Re: Song Ritual (Ритуал)
Reply #2 on: September 11, 2019, 00:15:06
@shatiks A very nice tune that reminds me of late 80s synth bands such as China Crisis and Gazebo. It also like it that it is sung in your mother tongue, although admittedly, I could only understand the word 'ritual' in it.

I am not so much bothered by the intro being detached. I think it works ok enough. Possibly you could 'thicken' the chorus bits a bit with pads, to make them stand out a bit more.
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Re: Song Ritual (Ритуал)
Reply #3 on: September 11, 2019, 13:30:32
Always been a fan of your music.
Beautiful image too.
If there is a connection between the music and photo I cannot say.
So yes, a little bit of mystery never done me any harm.

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Re: Song Ritual (Ритуал)
Reply #4 on: September 14, 2019, 14:53:28
Hola @shatiks

This song keeps your style, so personal. I can't tell you anything else that I liked very much, just like the rest of your work. Your voice singing in your native language has that soft sadness of the North, I would love to know what the lyrics are about ::thumb::
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Re: Song Ritual (Ритуал)
Reply #5 on: September 14, 2019, 19:22:51
Thank you friends for your interest in the song. I add a simple translation into English.  If anyone wants to make an English adaptation in verse - I'll be very happy

Ritual

Missed the train
Station is my hotel now
Frosty draft
Will open all the doors for me there
Coldly. coldly
Today I won’t fall asleep
Waiting train in the hall
Wednesday night

chorus

People in the carriage
People on the platform
And the night station is not sleeping
Their eyes are sleepy
And monotonous sounds
This is a farewell ritual

2.
Late for the holiday
I could not get there
I'm sitting at the station
Maybe someone will give me a hand there
Coldly. coldly
Today I won’t fall asleep
Waiting my train
I won’t go back ... ..

chorus

People in the carriage
People on the platform
And the night station is not sleeping
Their eyes are sleepy
And monotonous sounds
This is a farewell ritual





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