• Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
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Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
on: January 03, 2020, 11:24:54
Happy new year friends! New songs and inspiration to you! Especially for you my new song - "Take me away"

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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #1 on: January 22, 2020, 18:41:14
In more ways than one, dear @shatiks I am confused.

I think you and I will never post show stoppers, but at the same time no one bothered to post a reaction to this delicate song?
I donít know which calendar you use. Maybe itís only recently been Christmas and in that case I donít know when your new year begins.

So thank you very much for your well wishes. And I wish you and yours an beautiful, happy and creative 2020.

And I hope that it will be a year when you do a song that is less delicate. Musically speaking.
But even if you choose to stay on the careful side, I like it a lot.
Nice touch of cello (real or electronic, I am never sure).

Kind regards from a fan, Gus


Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #2 on: January 22, 2020, 21:23:02
Wow....I'm sorry I missed this one @shatiks . I always look forward to hearing what you are up to. I like how the drum propels this song forward and I love where your vocals sit. Everything about this song works for me. It's really a beautiful song.

Thanks to @LePlongeur for bumping this. Folks should really give this song a listen.
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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #3 on: January 23, 2020, 16:57:45
In my country, the new year begins in January and the holidays last almost the entire month. I know this is strange to you. But we are used to it and will use it as an advance for next year. And in the new year, I will continue to introduce you to my new songs. And not only delicate and lyrical. Thanks for the feedback  :pompom:


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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #4 on: January 24, 2020, 01:30:09
I love the overall feel of the song @shatiks .... except for the insistent hard beat.

I find it at odds with the rest of the sound of the track.  Perhaps hand-played percussion being a bit softer might work better. I don't know.  :no:

I'm not sure what your overall intent is, as we are missing an English translation of the lyrics it's difficult to know what the song is trying to convey this time.

Is Google correct and is the title "Take me Away " ?
"Love and Life is all about connections"


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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #5 on: January 24, 2020, 13:10:40
Only with you do I feel that I live
I was in paradise with you
Happiness is so close, just at arm's length
But you do not reach me

Refrain

Take me where love lives
In our cafe and everything comes to life
Where the river flows to the caves of the soul
To the rains of tears
In our forest with you

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Only with you did I feel young
Next to you is the world of morning smoke
A warm ray warms all your words
It's just a memory - you are in heaven

Refrain

Take me where love lives
In our cafe and everything comes to life
Where the river flows to the caves of the soul
To the rains of tears
In our forest with you

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Only with you did I feel that I was still alive
There was a paradise near you
Happiness is so close, just at arm's length
We are left, gone forever


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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #6 on: January 24, 2020, 13:11:43
Тільки з тобою я відчуваю що живу
Поряд з тобою я мов у раю
Щастя так близько, просто на відстані руки
Та дотягнутись не даєш мені

Приспів

Забери мене де любов живе
У наше кафе і все оживе
Де ріка тече до душі печер
До дощів із сліз
В наш з тобою ліс

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Тільки з тобою я почувався молодим
Поряд з тобою світ ранковий дим
Теплим промінням гріють усі твої слова
Це лише спогад Ė ти на небесах

Приспів

Забери мене де любов живе
У наше кафе і все оживе
Де ріка тече до душі печер
До дощів із сліз
В наш з тобою ліс

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Тільки з тобою я відчував що ще живу
Поряд з тобою був мов у раю
Щастя так близько, просто на відстані руки
Нас залишило, зникло назавжди


Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #7 on: January 24, 2020, 14:38:43
Thanks for posting the lyrics @shatiks . I have to say that the feeling of those lyrics got through to me just by listening to the song.


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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #8 on: January 25, 2020, 08:04:36
In my country, the new year begins in January and the holidays last almost the entire month. I know this is strange to you. But we are used to it and will use it as an advance for next year. And in the new year, I will continue to introduce you to my new songs. And not only delicate and lyrical. Thanks for the feedback  :pompom:

Yes, I see @shatiks .
Thanks for the explanation.
I understand that you use a translation site. So do I under circumstances. And I was deeply disappointed by what google translation had to offer.
A friend of mine suggested DeepL free. Try that one and have a look at the results. I like this one a lot better.

And I listened again to your song, with the lyrics this time. Thank you for posting.
Very very good indeed!
I like it a lot!
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #9 on: January 25, 2020, 12:22:55
Thanks, Gus! I just used a new translator. Not sure what it is more correct. But I think this version is cleaner. 

You're the only one I feel like living with
Next to you, I'm like heaven.
Happiness is so close, just at arm's length.
But you can't reach it.

chorus

Take me where love lives.
In our cafť and everything will come to life.
Where the river flows through the caves of the soul
To the rains of tears
In the forest that you and I have.

3
You were the only one I felt young with.
The world next to you is morning smoke.
All your words have warmed me up with warm rays.
It's just a memory. You're in heaven.

chorus

Take me where love lives.
In our cafť and everything will come to life.
Where the river flows through the caves of the soul
To the rains of tears
In the forest that you and I have.

3
You're the only one I felt I was still living with.
It was like heaven next to you.
Happiness is so close, just at arm's length.
We've been left behind, gone forever.

Translated with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)


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Re: Song "Take me away" (Забери мене)
Reply #10 on: January 25, 2020, 14:39:03
Looks great to me @shatiks . But I am not a native English speaker. Iíve learned that ĎI should keep something at an armís lengthí. And I take it that that is a common expression. I am not sure the that AN is needed always.

So can Shatiks get any help to make sure itís english? Please remember that he uses a translator mostly to talk to us.
I actually like this.
Wish I could do it myself. But my English is not English enough, Iím afraid.
Let's be patient, S. and see what happens.
Kind regards, Gus



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