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Spermaontvankelijk/Receptive
on: February 07, 2021, 13:24:50
« Last Edit: February 07, 2021, 13:31:49 by LePlongeur »
In 'Ingredients', we started a FAWM topic.
With say 7 Kitcheners, we aim to write a 14 song album to present as a collective sampler to Kitchen Radio. Both for fun and to revive the Radio.

I have written/recorded two. It says nothing about definitive entries from me, but i wanted to start off properly..
So this is the first, in both Dutch and English.

This is the link to the Dutch version.

https://soundclick.com/r/s8g6va

The lyrics:

RefI
Een nieuwe soort porn?
En razend populair
Fijn voor de belichting
Model verdien

RefII
Je benen om mijn nek
Spermaontvankelijk
Gelukkig niet gefilmd
Of toch misschien

Ik neem je mee naar de houten tafel
En leg je er languit overheen
Verspil geen tijd aan VIVA praatjes
Ik doe je hard en ook meteen

Als je moeder je rijlessen cadeau
Had gegeven - helemaal niet gek
Was je twaalf uur gwoon thuis geweest
Inplaats van mijn tong diep in je bek

Keken rond op plaatsen waar we kwamen
Blinde deur achter code woord
Met pillen van onbekende oorsprong
Puberteit? ‘t is vooral kantje boord

Jonge vrouwen dansen schaars gekleed
En jij bent daar geen uitzondering op
Je lacht, ‘k ruik zweet en ook hormonen
‘K ga je uitwonen dus dat wordt top

W18jul2019nl

And the link for the English one:

https://soundclick.com/r/s8g6vd

Receptive
I take you to the wooden table
And stretch you out over it
We don’t waste any time on small talk
We feel an urgency right away

If your mother would have given you
Driving lessons - not a bad idea
You would have been home at 12 o’clock
I like this better ‘s what I say

We were surprised ‘bout places we went
Massive door behind a code word
With pills of unknown origin
Puberty? it’s a close shave

All young women dance scantily clad
You’re no exception to that rule
You smile, I smell sweat and hormones
Anticipating how we’ll behave

ChI
It’s a new kind of porn
Extremely popular
Nice for your exposure
It’s worth the cause

ChII
Your legs around my neck
Receptive to a lot
Fortunately not filmed
Maybe it was

W5feb2021eng


Enjoy!

Kind regards, Gus



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Re: Spermaontvankelijk/Receptive
Reply #1 on: February 08, 2021, 10:23:40
Hi @LePlongeur  - by coincidence I totally missed the FAWM action. What a cool idea - I'd like to join in, and write a new song, on a theme that you would propose. It wouldn't , probably, be the theme of this song here, found the lyrics a bit raw... kitchenwise...

Reviving the Kitchen Radio is a very good idea too!  We could have a separate thread in another board about that.

Cheers and thanks for keeping the stoves burning



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Re: Spermaontvankelijk/Receptive
Reply #2 on: February 08, 2021, 11:25:00
Good morning @oorlab
Hope this finds you well.

Normally my ‘life’ inspired lyrics are of a french nature.
In France You can get away with pretty much everything, as long as you mind your language.
I was expecting some critical remarks. It was an experiment for I believe two months or so to write it just as I like. That I abandoned that way of writing is an indication that I am not convinced it’s for me.

So, instead of throwing away the lyrics it decided to write an English (more subtle) version. Apparently not subtle enough. It’s only the 8th, so I still have plenty of time to dream up something else.

In the Fawm topic you will find everything you’ll need to join. I like it a lot that you want to join.
It’s a collective effort in the sense that everyone writes two songs. If you want to write to different ones, or a ‘series’ of two is completely up to you.

Thank you for listening and your comment.
Kind regards, Gus



Re: Spermaontvankelijk/Receptive
Reply #3 on: February 08, 2021, 14:38:38
@LePlongeur Congratulations!! ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::


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Re: Spermaontvankelijk/Receptive
Reply #4 on: February 09, 2021, 11:50:40
Thank you very much @Marcus Nalgaber for listening.
That means a lot to me.
Kind regards, Gus