• Summertime Funk
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Summertime Funk
on: May 19, 2019, 02:31:38


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Re: Summertime Funk
Reply #1 on: May 22, 2019, 23:31:29
@JoshRoehl  - upbeat positive dance track. Liking the lyrics too. Some solo instrument (Saxophone, Guitar?) halfway could enhance your mix.
Good luck with the summer hit  ::thumb::
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Re: Summertime Funk
Reply #2 on: May 23, 2019, 13:21:15
I have said this before, Josh......you have a very unique and kind of campy thing going on here. I absolutely LOVE that little "dance, get up" interlude.....I can see you dancing...and having a blast.

You should check out a few threads here at the kitchen and let folks know you stopped by. That way you might get some more folks stopping by to listen to your funk.

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Re: Summertime Funk
Reply #3 on: May 26, 2019, 19:34:04
It would be great @JoshRoehl if you posted your lyrics on here too for the benefit of our members who don't have English as their first language.

Lyrically it seems quite interesting but I think you need to work more on how the words fall. Some phrases sound rushed because you can't fit all the syllables into the rhythm. That makes things feel a bit sloppy like you've got 2/3rd's of the way in the song and not finished refining it. 

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