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the brighter side of living
on: February 11, 2021, 18:10:36
« Last Edit: February 11, 2021, 19:47:57 by rightly »
I wrote this song time ago (almost seems dated)
never got to know the source of the inspiration
she got away.

I'd be thrilled with feedback, even straight talkin'

Very easy write at the time

Link:

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/the-brighter-side-of-living

Lyrics:

The Brighter Side Of Living



I have never seen
anyone more deserving
Iíve never felt more
 inclined to be forgiving
If you donít have the time
then please take mine
 to the brighter side
of living

you seem to vanish just
as fast as you appear
and in this vacuum I
can neither see nor hear
now left behind
 you pay me no mind
and this is most unfair
my dear

the night draws in,
a heavy curtain
 of history and doubt
I cannot sing
oh, so what the hell?
this is how,
this is how

donít leave me stranded
a masterpiece unwritten
 understand I'm one whole mess
of division
and you are too kind
to say itís alright
 when we both know it
really isnít

the lives Iíve dreamt
as a tapestry
of misery unfolds
so to hell with mine,
look now for there
she goes, there she goes
to the brighter side
alone

the brighter side of living

__________


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Re: the brighter side of living
Reply #1 on: February 11, 2021, 19:43:43
 :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: @rightly

nice tune, great track  :yes: :yes: :yes: Weirdly cheerful, while the story doesn't end up really well

i like it  ::headphone::
me, myself, and Pie


Re: the brighter side of living
Reply #2 on: February 11, 2021, 19:49:33
All I can say is that I really like it. Love the brass sounds....perfectly discordant at times.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: the brighter side of living
Reply #3 on: February 16, 2021, 03:01:22
are you talking to yourself from two SC accounts? if so, i love you


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Re: the brighter side of living
Reply #4 on: February 16, 2021, 08:13:56
are you talking to yourself from two SC accounts? if so, i love you

Aye, I certainly am.

Lol.


Re: the brighter side of living
Reply #5 on: February 16, 2021, 12:59:53
Hola @rightly

I love the introduction, its atmosphere and then the arrangement so full of rhythm and dance steps framing your lyrics, deep and beautifully constructed. I liked hearing its color.

Stay safe

Mora
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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