• The caravan
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The caravan
on: September 05, 2019, 14:35:14
« Last Edit: September 15, 2019, 22:36:56 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
Many times I wonder what life is and looking around, this thought that I leave here today, comes to my mind.
If there is any grammatical error in my lyrics, please tell me




Life
what can I do
if you always nod
and all that happens
suits you

Life
what can I do
I am a wax doll
under the fire
of your eyes
I am a wax doll
under the fire
of your eyes

I am
a caravan
crossing unnamed deserts
trying to fix the path
to guide all those
I am

Among so many dunes
of doubts
looking for unknown
words
that help my steps to fly
leaving the flames behind

that help my steps to fly
leaving the flames behind

Life
you are a beast
that made me wild
having to kill for eating x 2

I am a wax doll
under the fire
of your eyes
I am a wax doll
under the fire
of your eyes
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: The caravan
Reply #1 on: September 05, 2019, 19:44:27
I LOVE these lyrics throughout....but this line is superb:

I am a wax doll
under the fire
of your eyes


This is such an enjoyable listen @Mora Amaro La Loba . The guitar work from Marcus creates a wonderful sonic tableau for your vocals and for the feelings behind the song.

Your songs always leave me pondering deeply....this one is no exception.
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Re: The caravan
Reply #2 on: September 06, 2019, 01:25:37
Hola !!

Surely many people think something similar, and even if yes or not, it does not matter, everything continues to happen.

Marcus guitar always fits in my music, more than this, it is a key that opens other sounds.

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Re: The caravan
Reply #3 on: September 07, 2019, 13:06:50
Outstanding @Mora Amaro La Loba  - can't realy judge the grammar, but the poetic inspiration sure is there: sparse - to the point
I like
"Among so many dunes
of doubts
looking for unknown
words"

And the music sounds very good! The guitar, the elegant drums. Marcus played the guitar?
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Re: The caravan
Reply #4 on: September 09, 2019, 12:59:49

I like
"Among so many dunes
of doubts
looking for unknown
words"

And the music sounds very good! The guitar, the elegant drums. Marcus played the guitar?
Bis!

Hi @oorlab

haha
yes, the guitar of Marcus accompanies me always.
Thank you for visiting me.


Re: The caravan
Reply #5 on: September 09, 2019, 20:07:26
yeah @Mora Amaro La Loba i dig it. cool guitar work
fly away and find my peace of mind...
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Re: The caravan
Reply #6 on: September 11, 2019, 17:35:01
hola @man of simple pleasures

I like a lot your nick!

Thank you very much.


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Re: The caravan
Reply #7 on: September 13, 2019, 05:44:28
Another hypnotic song @Mora Amaro La Loba with excellent guitar work.

Your videos always impress me, they must take a lot of effort and editing but well worth that effort.

The only grammar comment I would have on the words (and it's not that important) is the verse:


Life
you are a beast
that made me guilt
having to kill for eating

could possibly be:

Life
you are a beast
that made me guilty
for having me kill to eat

cheers


Re: The caravan
Reply #8 on: September 14, 2019, 14:57:43
Another hypnotic song @Mora Amaro La Loba with excellent guitar work.

Your videos always impress me, they must take a lot of effort and editing but well worth that effort.

The only grammar comment I would have on the words (and it's not that important) is the verse:


Life
you are a beast
that made me guilt
having to kill for eating

could possibly be:

Life
you are a beast
that made me guilty
for having me kill to eat

cheers


Thank you for commenting. Yes, you are right but I'll explain it: The word I used first was "wild" but due to my bad pronunciation I decided to transform it to "guilt", the guilt, not guilty. Now I will go back and put again "wild" letting apart my pronunciation. hahaha


Re: The caravan
Reply #9 on: September 14, 2019, 18:16:13
The opening spanish guitar with subtle percussion is sooooo classy @Mora Amaro La Loba ,,,, and things get more hypnotic from there.
It occurs that you must really enjoy the creativity of video production- yours are always aligned so well with the music.
Without reading the lyrics ( hard to look away from those desert images!) the first time through I heard "rocks doll" rather than "wax doll" It didn`t take away from your song- I love your phrasing !
Another big  :pompom: :pompom: for Marcus guitar tracks -they give such flavour to your music.

Robert


Re: The caravan
Reply #10 on: September 15, 2019, 21:20:44
The opening spanish guitar with subtle percussion is sooooo classy @Mora Amaro La Loba ,,,, and things get more hypnotic from there.
It occurs that you must really enjoy the creativity of video production- yours are always aligned so well with the music.
Without reading the lyrics ( hard to look away from those desert images!) the first time through I heard "rocks doll" rather than "wax doll" It didn`t take away from your song- I love your phrasing !
Another big  :pompom: :pompom: for Marcus guitar tracks -they give such flavour to your music.

Robert

Hola @robertkc
Gracias.

My phrasing is wild!!! Yes, Marcus guitar has always something special.  Thanks from him!!! and yes, you are right, I enjoy a lot making my videos.