• The corner of the night
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The corner of the night
on: March 13, 2019, 15:15:36
When I made this song, I did not know how to develop it, but finally, I think I have managed to give it the thread that a theme of this nature needed.

 I keep this time the voice in the foreground thinking it has to be like this, however any suggestion regarding the mix or English will be very welcome.




Night
of echoes
that appear in the ears
with distant insistence

Night
of steps
looking for themselves
between own mists
own mists

Night
plagued
with streets
that only exist
where dreams happen

Night
plagued
with streets
that only exist
where dreams happen


Night
naked
of everything
speak to me
from your shadows

If you see me pass
because time stopped
but I did not stop
walking
but I did not stop
walking
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
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https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


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Re: The corner of the night
Reply #1 on: March 13, 2019, 15:47:40
I REALLY like this one., Mora!!! Just..everything about it works. The lyrics and how you present them are so in keeping with your amazing esoteric style. You have a way of looking at the world that keeps your listeners....listening intently.  ;)

Very cool guitar work by Marcus and another mesmerizing video.
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Re: The corner of the night
Reply #2 on: March 14, 2019, 15:24:38
Increible what a poet you are!
I have not any suggestion regarding to your English, because that is who you are, it fits you like a dress, the way you pronounce English, it belongs to you as an artist  ::heart::  ::heart:: ::heart::
also a goat understands a joke


Re: The corner of the night
Reply #3 on: March 16, 2019, 01:01:44
I REALLY like this one., Mora!!! Just..everything about it works. The lyrics and how you present them are so in keeping with your amazing esoteric style. You have a way of looking at the world that keeps your listeners....listening intently.  ;)

Very cool guitar work by Marcus and another mesmerizing video.

Thank you! @Leonard Scaper  It has been difficult for me to find the thread that would give body to the subject, both to make the lyrics and to make the video. Finally, I have managed to tell a story that does not happen.


Re: The corner of the night
Reply #4 on: March 16, 2019, 12:01:23
@Mora Amaro La Loba  - definitely don't change accent - very much part of the vibe and proposition. The guitar figures are cool - more interplay with them.
The beat or rhythm could be more clearer in the mix: my recipe would be, first some EQ of the beat to the lower part, then some compression... compare it for instance with Brian Ferry Don't stop the dance...
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


Re: The corner of the night
Reply #5 on: Yesterday at 14:33:02
Increible what a poet you are!
I have not any suggestion regarding to your English, because that is who you are, it fits you like a dress, the way you pronounce English, it belongs to you as an artist  ::heart::  ::heart:: ::heart::

You always make me feel good with your words


Re: The corner of the night
Reply #6 on: Yesterday at 16:15:35
Yeah I get a big Bryan Ferry vibe here, that yuppie dance music he was doing in the 80s.
Extremely pleasant on the ears and the toes, so it's got a bit for both ends. Very nice.
Sounds very dream like, and the lyrics are suitably mysterious with some neat guitar lines floating about.
I was having an out of body experience.



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