• The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
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The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
on: March 30, 2019, 14:11:28
« Last Edit: March 30, 2019, 14:30:24 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
Making songs is like making movies, many of us know it, creating short stories that describe emotions, situations, actions, thoughts, fears .... So many things...

Today I leave this song that portrays those doubts of any kind that involve you in the fear of deciding or living.

I usually start with a rhythmic base that suggests sensations ... and then I build a sound creature that welcomes my voice and inspires me the color of the melody.
When I have developed the song and recorded the voice I pass it to @Marcus Nalgaber and he, with his guitar, gives the perfect finish to my creation. How good!

I have differentiated 2 main parts in the song emphasizing their difference. I hope you like it.
Any suggestions regarding sound or lyrics will be well received as I can improve the original video on Vimeo like this.






What is a doubt?
doubt?

it has no face
it has no mouth

what is a doubt?

a key
that opens doors

it's just obsession

Obsession

Doubt

Such a small word
to describe
what is immense

What is a doubt?

Doubts
doubts

Having no face
I feel your gaze
having no mouth
I feel your breath

You are a poison
clutched to my senses

You are obsession

riding my thoughts
my hands
my steps

You are obsession

Letting me blind
among spies
letting me nude
among cold knives x2

You are a poison
clutched to my senses

you are obsession

Letting me blind
among spies
letting me nude
among cold knives x2

You are a poison
clutched to my senses

You are obsession
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
My Vimeo Songs of Thought channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #1 on: March 30, 2019, 14:48:21
« Last Edit: March 30, 2019, 15:18:27 by DonMar »

Today I leave this song that portrays those doubts of any kind that involve you in the fear of deciding or living.

Any suggestions regarding sound or lyrics will be well received as I can improve the original video on Vimeo like this.



@Mora Amaro La Loba, what an interesting video, and a beautifully sparse, thought-provoking lyric.  :)

I have just a couple of minor suggestions, which I hope are useful. Keep or sweep, of course.  :)

Donna

Nude among Spies  This is an intriguing title. I think though that 'Naked among Spies' would be stronger. It has broader connotations.
What is a doubt?
doubt?

it has no face
it has no mouth

what is a doubt?

a key
that opens doors

it's just obsession

Obsession

Doubt

Such a small word
to describe
what is immense

What is a doubt?

Doubts
doubts

Having no face
I feel your gaze
having no mouth
I feel your breath

You are a poison
clutched by my senses Or alternatively, 'You are a poison/pervading my senses'. Or, perhaps stronger, 'Invading my senses'.

You are obsession If this refers now to the other person, I suggest 'You're an obsession'.

riding my thoughts
my hands
my steps

You are obsession

Leaving me blind
among spies
Leaving me naked
among cold knives x2

You are a poison
clutched by my senses

you are obsession

Leaving me blind
among spies
Leaving me naked
among cold knives x2

You are a poison
clutched by my senses

You are obsession
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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #2 on: March 31, 2019, 14:18:06
Hi @DonMar,

Thank you very much for your time and suggestions. I'll think more deeply about your ideas to decide, although already although I recognize that "naked " is stronger, I'll maintain "nude" to keep the more poetic idea. I'll tell you about the changes I'll make. See you soon. Mora

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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #3 on: March 31, 2019, 22:03:19
@Mora Amaro La Loba    I always enjoy watching your videos


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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #4 on: March 31, 2019, 23:02:41
a fantastic track!!! @Mora Amaro La Loba
that delay like groove you have in this is super nice  in my opinion

it all fits and works
together so well
and needless to say....the guitarist is pretty damn... awesome too   :o :o :ok: :ok: :ok:
 ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #5 on: April 02, 2019, 18:41:57
@Mora Amaro La Loba    I always enjoy watching your videos

Hi @Vince
I love you love it. Thank you very much.


Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #6 on: April 02, 2019, 18:46:12
« Last Edit: April 02, 2019, 18:48:54 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
a fantastic track!!! @Mora Amaro La Loba
that delay like groove you have in this is super nice  in my opinion

it all fits and works
together so well
and needless to say....the guitarist is pretty damn... awesome too   :o :o :ok: :ok: :ok:
 ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::


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Hello boy!
Thanks, the truth is that almost all my songs have that kind of delay, it gives more air to the voice and frees it from the prison of time.
(The guitarist always puts a velvet bow to my stories)

Thanks for seeing me.


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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #7 on: April 04, 2019, 14:30:53
wow!!

really enjoyed this
so many nice, surprising moves.

"doubt has no mouth"

your voice is as enchanting as ever
and crikey the guitarist a trip!!

What a colorful thing you are!

Thanks for sharing


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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #8 on: April 04, 2019, 16:53:12
@Mora Amaro La Loba
If ever I get enough time to make video’s to augment my songs, i’ll Enjoy your video’s all over again.
Specially the parking with the smooth dancing police woman.

This one’s yet another intriguing piece of work.
Nice!
Kind regards, Gus


Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #9 on: April 05, 2019, 15:16:49
wow!!

really enjoyed this
so many nice, surprising moves.

"doubt has no mouth"

your voice is as enchanting as ever
and crikey the guitarist a trip!!

What a colorful thing you are!

Thanks for sharing

Thank you @Rightly . Your words always are very kind.


Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #10 on: April 05, 2019, 15:18:33
@Mora Amaro La Loba
If ever I get enough time to make video’s to augment my songs, i’ll Enjoy your video’s all over again.
Specially the parking with the smooth dancing police woman.

This one’s yet another intriguing piece of work.
Nice!
Kind regards, Gus

As a painter that I am, I think I've mentioned it to you some time, that's why I like to make my videos with the fantasy of an invisible brush that paints scenes that move.
Thanks for watching, listening and commenting.


Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #11 on: April 05, 2019, 21:59:29
« Last Edit: April 05, 2019, 22:30:53 by eric craptone »
Didnt get into this till 1.17 mins when the spirit of Bryan Ferry appeared again, and it went up a gear and booted me nude onto the dance floor, where I noticed James Bond and Austin Powers studying me jealously. ;D
I hope I didnt offend you last time when I said "you sound passionately involved in your lyrics but the music doesnt", but that is an unavoidable  side effect  of using dance music.  Dance music is for dancing and not  thinking, consequently lyrics are  not exactly taken seriously.
I enjoyed my liberated dance with the spies.


Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #12 on: April 06, 2019, 13:55:01
« Last Edit: April 06, 2019, 14:26:39 by Marcus Nalgaber »
@Mora Amaro La Loba  :loveit:

Yours is something exceptional.

I and the others only make songs and in most cases only the audios are shared while you do two things at once.
On the one hand you make the song and on the other hand you make the video and you do not do a normal video.

Your videos, songs and lyrics are very good, sometimes better than many fucking videos of celebrities almost nobody will recognize what you are worth and your value because we live on a planet of people with a childish mind.

You are a very versatile artist and I assure you that it does not abound too much.

I admire you  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

Best Regards,

Marcus


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Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #13 on: April 06, 2019, 15:40:30
« Last Edit: April 06, 2019, 19:59:50 by LePlongeur »
@Mora Amaro La Loba
I admire you too, though not exactly the same way as Marcus. But you will readily understand that.
And I agree that Nude among spies is the better of the two. Compared to naked, I mean.
Maybe nude (instead of nu) music is also a thing to consider.
Ahhhhh....., a blather from me this time.
Love both your music as well as your videos.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: The doubt - Nude among spies - Nu Music
Reply #14 on: April 07, 2019, 13:33:09

"doubt has no mouth"

Hi @Rightly

The colorful thing  thanks you!