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the forest of blue
on: December 03, 2020, 09:54:56
Hello everybody!

With a fellow artist (of relatively infinite talent)...

... well she wrote this song, we talked about it and I produced it, she eventually gave me er vocals which I mixed in, n' there y'have it.

I'm very happy with the outcome. We're doing an album together
 - I think the project is moving swiftly along. It seems I get a touch obsessive. What?

I'd like some feedback from you guys, n I hope you like it!!

All the best!!

rightly

The link:


https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/the-forest-of-blue-1


Lyrics:

  the forest of blue
                     

   a wildness inside her, calling for you,           
  come into my darkness, my forest of blue
 her hands so cold, so cold, reaching for you,
 touching y' deep in your soul, melting your blue
                     melting your blue

   you turn to catch a glimpse, to find a clue,
 who's making you feel so alive, in the forest of blue?
 you see her standing there, breathe in, one and two,
her eyes are locked on yours, she says I do, will you,
                         y' know I want to

             be mine, take my hand
                      to the edges of time,
               where we can be soooo blue

  they walk hand in hand, no light gets through,
    the leaves all gather 'round, a love so true.
 the trees all bend and bow, like they always knew,
  this love so deep and alive, in the forest of blue
                      the forest of blue

                blue, blue
         the forest of blue


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    Firecat / Righty

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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #1 on: December 03, 2020, 12:09:47
I liked it a lot, the song is very beautiful and the song is very well constructed. I like the sound in general, it is envolving and highlights the delicate voice and when yours appears the contrast is great. Good job, congratulations to you and your collaborator @rightly

Stay safe

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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #2 on: December 06, 2020, 10:38:52
I liked it a lot, the song is very beautiful and the song is very well constructed. I like the sound in general, it is envolving and highlights the delicate voice and when yours appears the contrast is great. Good job, congratulations to you and your collaborator @rightly

Stay safe

Mora

Thanks Mora!
reading you appreciate any work of mine motivates me.
please do stay tuned

Rightly


Re: the forest of blue
Reply #3 on: December 06, 2020, 12:08:22
This is an excellent combination of haunting instrumentation and clear and soaring vocals. I like how the strings punch through hard every once in a while and how you come in with a vocalization in the back a few times @rightly .

This one does feel like an album song......I found myself waiting for the next song to see where you would take the vibe.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #4 on: December 07, 2020, 11:47:57
This is an excellent combination of haunting instrumentation and clear and soaring vocals. I like how the strings punch through hard every once in a while and how you come in with a vocalization in the back a few times @rightly .

This one does feel like an album song......I found myself waiting for the next song to see where you would take the vibe.

Hi @Leonard Scaper

yes I know what you mean with
album track
It will be part of an album Red Riding Hood theme
Album will be called "wolves"

Thanks for commenting!


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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #5 on: December 07, 2020, 19:20:08
 :o :o :o :o :o ::headphone::

wow, @rightly ,this is great!!!!

sounds super good, music, with a STUNNING vocal  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

i hope it is ok, and i guess it is, this reminds of the best of Kate Bush!!!! awesome, you two!  :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #6 on: December 09, 2020, 20:00:34
@rightly i dig it. like instruments on it! top vocals
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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #7 on: December 10, 2020, 08:11:04
My first look at the lyric, at the opening line, I thought it read, a wilderness inside her......

Like the song, man. Interesting lyric, and a melancholy melody..........rather bewitching, I'd say.
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Re: the forest of blue
Reply #8 on: December 13, 2020, 14:42:11
My first look at the lyric, at the opening line, I thought it read, a wilderness inside her......

Like the song, man. Interesting lyric, and a melancholy melody..........rather bewitching, I'd say.

bewitchching yes,
certainly had that effect on me
thanks for the comment


Re: the forest of blue
Reply #9 on: December 13, 2020, 22:19:43
Great vibe! Very intriguing! :-)
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