• The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
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The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
on: December 13, 2019, 15:11:12
« Last Edit: December 13, 2019, 15:15:46 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
ummm
This time a song talking about something many people know but do not talk about...
I find the mix is good but... I do not reach to adjust the low sound as I want... But maybe the song does not need it...




I am the ghost
who lives
under the shadow
of a tree
with no name
with no name

I am the ghost
who lives
under the shadow
of a tree
with no name

I am the ghost
who lives
over the flowers
lying on old graves
with no name
with no name

I'm my ghost
I'm my ghost
but I'm fine
but I'm fine

I'm not cold
or hot
and I can fly
when I walk

I'm not cold
or hot
and I can fly
when I walk

I can inspire
the whispers
of creatures
furtives
under the light
on the other side of mine
on the other side of mine

I can spy
the dreams
of those who are dark
wandering
wandering among my seas
wandering
wandering among my seas


Nothing I can grab
nothing I can lose
nothing
left
to fear

nothing
left
to fear

I am the ghost
who lives
under the shadow
of a tree
with no name
with no name

I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #1 on: December 13, 2019, 23:21:13
@Mora Amaro La Loba   / once again an astonishing song and visual. Where do you get your inspiration from? And what an effort to put such an multilayered pro looking video together.
I didn't find anything wrong in the sound, low or otherwise.

I wonder what we know about but not talk about.... ghosts? I admit it's not a daily topic of conversation but if I'd encounter folks who know about them it would be discussed surely.
Off course we had the Ghostr challenge on this forum some time ago.

https://www.songwriter-forum-kitchen.com/forum/challenges/18/ghost-in-the-kitchen-songwriting-challenge-official-thread/5648/
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Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #2 on: December 16, 2019, 14:02:37
@Mora Amaro La Loba   / once again an astonishing song and visual. Where do you get your inspiration from? And what an effort to put such an multilayered pro looking video together.
I didn't find anything wrong in the sound, low or otherwise.

I wonder what we know about but not talk about.... ghosts? I admit it's not a daily topic of conversation but if I'd encounter folks who know about them it would be discussed surely.
Off course we had the Ghostr challenge on this forum some time ago.

https://www.songwriter-forum-kitchen.com/forum/challenges/18/ghost-in-the-kitchen-songwriting-challenge-official-thread/5648/

Yes @oorlab
I participated too on the Ghost challenge and I had a lot of fun doing my song!
Thank you for watching and commenting and yes, I put a lot of effort...  ::smiley::


Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #3 on: December 18, 2019, 00:47:45
A stunning video to accompany  another atmospheric song @Mora Amaro La Loba
Your work draws me in to the inner life...and after life!
Top level production in every way.

Robert


Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #4 on: December 18, 2019, 00:56:36
@Mora Amaro La Loba I quite like those little melodies that play in the background, interacting with the rhythm. The bubbly cadence works quite well. This is a very good song, with an eerie clip, but you appear to have a knack for that :)
Pleudoniem: composer; bass guitarist; guitarist; singer; drummer; tap-guitarist - o, and yes... erm- a bit of keys. Open for collabs.
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Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #5 on: December 18, 2019, 10:41:10
Dear @Mora Amaro La Loba , what an excellent recording and great art work. I think you should not get any lower in sound. Everything is well balanced and mutually supporting (including the lyrics). The lyrics themselves I find daunting. Gosts galore in my life but I haven't met this one, let alone talked about her him.
Charlie
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Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #6 on: December 18, 2019, 10:54:43
Hola!

Like it  a lot @Mora Amaro La Loba !! :loveit:
Please never stopp beeing creative like this! :) :)
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Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #7 on: December 18, 2019, 13:59:58
@Mora Amaro La Loba ....this is possibly the coolest video production yet from you. Just amazing, really. Your productions just keep getting more refined. The song and the visuals are an amazing experience.

"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

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Re: The ghost under the tree - Have you ever seen one?
Reply #8 on: December 19, 2019, 13:58:04
Hi @robertkc
It makes me happy you feel that!!! inner life... after life!!! We are 3 at least, a body with its own character, a mind with its concepts and measures and the soul with its light and karma...

@Pleudoniem
"with an eerie clip, but you appear to have a knack for that" -  I am a painter too and to make my clips is a way of painting actually.
Today I'll begin again with a painting of mine that has a strange story behind, it is the third time I'll paint it!! Someday I'll explain the story!!!

@Charlie
Yes you are right, lyrics are daunting, I think ghosts are generally sad... or silent. Poetry is to speak of sadness... Even the stones can be sad in poetry.

Hola @Leonard Scaper
Sometimes sadness is a good color to paint words.


Hi @Mo

Of course! I can't stop, I am possessed!!! hahaha


Thank you to all of you for watching and commenting and Merry Christmas!!!   
Mora





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