The land in you

Hi kitcheners,

glad to be back for some more cooking. Hope everybody is fine?!

First song of the year  , a ballad this time up 

I had this lyric going o in my head for ages and always wanted to try  this kind of vocaltype.

Haunting and fragile and a bit like thin glass .....I gave my best and Dave does it  always anyway.

Hope you like it , but feel free to let me have yor precious opinions....still demo

Here we go

https://www.reverbnation.com/blueattitudemusic/song/30470582-the-land-in-you

The Land in you
1V
so deep
so endlessly deep
trying to bring my hope down low
to the vale in me
2
subtle moves
we made a few
between me and you
love and the prove
are we willing to lose
CHORUS
Oh does anybody know
how can I find
my way
to the land in you
3 V
fear
and she always appears
like a string of a lute
makes the nightbird mute

Beautiful!
Gently forceful, if such a description makes any sense.
A great new track.
What do you mean with ‘demo’, or this a chicken heart way to tell me you are too shy, @Chris Spruit .
Don’t know if ‘vale’ means anything. If it does, it might help if you put a y  too.

One of the most amazing songs in the Kitchen right now.
Hat off to Dave too.
Kind regards, Gus

@LePlongeur
Glad you like it Gus.
BTW the vale is an old world for valley and I love old words 😁
Demo means, still open to tweaks and development if necessary.
Chicken heart me, noooo lol
Maybe sometimes 🤔 XxxChris

  what a pleasure to listen tothis, beautriful vocal performance. Lovely lead guitar 

awesome 

Really good song........kind of laid back and sooooo smooth. I love how your voice is tucked in like that. It's a beautiful vocal performance.

Seriously good guitars as well in this. Good song....excellent performances....pro quality mix. Benchmark quality production.   

And the bass is so much better ‘bedding’ the rest.
Kind regards, Gus

It is a very good song, a great way to start your year.
Everything goes well here, the production,  the sound, and mix are perfect (by my taste) and I love, love, love your chorus, something I have to practice in my songs.

Perhaps, to say something perverse, your voice is a little loose sometimes ... but always wonderful and delicate.

Good work Chris. 

Top drawer stuff! Great vocals, mighty fine fret work and a top notch production at that, what more can one ask for?
Nothing more to say really, respect!

/JB

@Jambrains @Mora Amaro La Loba
Thank you for your kind comments, glad that you like it.
@LePlongeur oh yes to find the right  bass , always a discussion worth it. That reminds me......going to send you a wetransfer , wait....

A very beautiful and nostalgic music that in part takes me to the 70s and that simple fantasy

Very good work 

....I like this a lot! All elements work really well together and your voice is perfect for this style.
Thanks for sharing!

A very beautiful and nostalgic music that in part takes me to the 70s and that simple fantasy

Very good work 

@Marcus Nalgaber Thank you Marcus,, Dave ( the guitarist) is a guy from the  70s , he tought me a lot ! 

....I like this a lot! All elements work really well together and your voice is perfect for this style.
Thanks for sharing!

@Rachel_D Thank you for listening and friendly feddback