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The land in you
on: February 03, 2019, 10:18:06
Hi kitcheners,

glad to be back for some more cooking. Hope everybody is fine?!

First song of the year  , a ballad this time up  :lol:

I had this lyric going o in my head for ages and always wanted to try  this kind of vocaltype.

Haunting and fragile and a bit like thin glass .....I gave my best and Dave does it  always anyway.

Hope you like it , but feel free to let me have yor precious opinions....still demo

Here we go

https://www.reverbnation.com/blueattitudemusic/song/30470582-the-land-in-you

The Land in you
1V
so deep
so endlessly deep
trying to bring my hope down low
to the vale in me
2
subtle moves
we made a few
between me and you
love and the prove
are we willing to lose
CHORUS
Oh does anybody know
how can I find
my way
to the land in you
3 V
fear
and she always appears
like a string of a lute
makes the nightbird mute
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Re: The land in you
Reply #1 on: February 03, 2019, 13:48:32
Beautiful!
Gently forceful, if such a description makes any sense.
A great new track.
What do you mean with ‘demo’, or this a chicken heart way to tell me you are too shy, @Chris Spruit .
Don’t know if ‘vale’ means anything. If it does, it might help if you put a y  too.

One of the most amazing songs in the Kitchen right now.
Hat off to Dave too.
Kind regards, Gus



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Re: The land in you
Reply #2 on: February 03, 2019, 14:08:17
@LePlongeur
Glad you like it Gus.
BTW the vale is an old world for valley and I love old words 😁
Demo means, still open to tweaks and development if necessary.
Chicken heart me, noooo lol
Maybe sometimes 🤔 XxxChris


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Re: The land in you
Reply #3 on: February 03, 2019, 16:46:34
 :ok: :ok: :ok: :ok: what a pleasure to listen tothis, beautriful vocal performance. Lovely lead guitar  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

awesome  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::
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Re: The land in you
Reply #4 on: February 03, 2019, 17:42:46
Really good song........kind of laid back and sooooo smooth. I love how your voice is tucked in like that. It's a beautiful vocal performance.

Seriously good guitars as well in this. Good song....excellent performances....pro quality mix. Benchmark quality production.   :)
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Re: The land in you
Reply #5 on: February 03, 2019, 18:00:05
And the bass is so much better ‘bedding’ the rest.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: The land in you
Reply #6 on: February 03, 2019, 18:27:23
It is a very good song, a great way to start your year.
Everything goes well here, the production,  the sound, and mix are perfect (by my taste) and I love, love, love your chorus, something I have to practice in my songs.

Perhaps, to say something perverse, your voice is a little loose sometimes ... but always wonderful and delicate.

Good work Chris.  ::thumb:: :pompom:
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Reply #7 on: February 04, 2019, 20:56:53
Top drawer stuff! Great vocals, mighty fine fret work and a top notch production at that, what more can one ask for?
Nothing more to say really, respect!

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Re: The land in you
Reply #8 on: February 05, 2019, 13:39:07
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Thank you for your kind comments, glad that you like it.
@LePlongeur oh yes to find the right  bass , always a discussion worth it. That reminds me......going to send you a wetransfer , wait....


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Re: The land in you
Reply #9 on: February 06, 2019, 17:58:47
A very beautiful and nostalgic music that in part takes me to the 70s and that simple fantasy

Very good work  ::thumb::


Re: The land in you
Reply #10 on: February 06, 2019, 18:03:36
....I like this a lot! :) All elements work really well together and your voice is perfect for this style.
Thanks for sharing! :)
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Reply #11 on: February 07, 2019, 13:38:08
A very beautiful and nostalgic music that in part takes me to the 70s and that simple fantasy

Very good work  ::thumb::

@Marcus Nalgaber Thank you Marcus,, Dave ( the guitarist) is a guy from the  70s , he tought me a lot !  :farewell:


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Reply #12 on: February 07, 2019, 13:39:40
....I like this a lot! :) All elements work really well together and your voice is perfect for this style.
Thanks for sharing! :)

@Rachel_D Thank you for listening and friendly feddback



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