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the one who truly deserves you
on: October 03, 2020, 09:07:38
I wrote this about ten months ago.
What's it all about? it's all there in the song.
(I will elaborate on request)

Enjoyment and

Feedback would be lovely

The link:

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/the-one-who-truly-deserves-yo


and the Lyrics


the one who truly deserves you

friends will be kind
until they kind of desert you
come the hour of
need you find they cannot afford to
be the one, the only one
who truly deserves you

look at the stars
and you'll see the way that I do
for all they care
you can go to hell, look out for yourself
when all is said and done, you're the one
best fit to rely on

be the one, the only one
who truly deserves you

pretty smiles are
 tasted until they change their shapes
while precious time
is wasted on vacuous handshakes
turn your back on those who would share
their onerous heartaches

be the one, the only one
who you can rely on
you're the one, the only one
who truly deserves you

the one who truly deserves you

      _______________

            rightly

          ____________________


Re: the one who truly deserves you
Reply #1 on: October 05, 2020, 21:06:36
I love the playing on this one........so uniquely expressive.

No explanation needed for me. The song lays the feelings out perfectly.
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Re: the one who truly deserves you
Reply #2 on: October 08, 2020, 16:47:53
I love the playing on this one........so uniquely expressive.

No explanation needed for me. The song lays the feelings out perfectly.

Well, elsewhere I got some negative criticism
The voice reverb is somehow off.
I dunno.

Glad you like the song.


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Re: the one who truly deserves you
Reply #3 on: October 09, 2020, 19:36:48
Beautifully original - which is really hard to do... Kind of hypnotic - I can't explain. This could revive Bryan Ferry's career! Either way - I get the angst and irony perfectly and it kind of sums up those times perfectly - because nothing makes sense to anyone except oneself...
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Re: the one who truly deserves you
Reply #4 on: October 09, 2020, 22:09:17
lovely, kurt weil came to mind nice, nice.

gr. Dan


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Re: the one who truly deserves you
Reply #5 on: October 14, 2020, 23:21:26
Beautifully original - which is really hard to do... Kind of hypnotic - I can't explain. This could revive Bryan Ferry's career! Either way - I get the angst and irony perfectly and it kind of sums up those times perfectly - because nothing makes sense to anyone except oneself...
Thanks Tolo
A thought provoking response
the song stuck with me
I wrote it on guitar
bluesy trying to keep it simple.
this version is kind of burlesque, decadent
I was sort of lucky with it.