• The well
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The well
on: March 04, 2019, 19:12:19
Discoveries often happen in an unexpected way, at any place and time, sometimes you realize.

I was hesitating between "at the top of the well" or  "on the top of a well", and given what I wanted to point out, "on top of the well", not at the top, I decided "on the top"

It would be great if, as always, you tell me what is wrong in English and I will correct it.



The well

I discovered
the Universe
one night
lost
in my yesterday
when
I was
lying
on the top of a well
on the top of a well


All the things
were stars
giving depth
to the sky
everything was true
everything was a lie
under that shining dark
under that shining dark

I walked
on the lost stones
that night
lost
in my yesterday

through the mirror
that lived in the fog
through the mirror
that lived in the fog

and I talked to the ghosts
of those that I loved
and I danced with the shadows
of the time that swims in peace
through the water of my tears.   x 2
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: The well
Reply #1 on: March 04, 2019, 19:54:29
You manage to stay one step ante la audiencia.
It’s pure magic!
Love it. Great piece of work.

Kind regards, Gus


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Re: The well
Reply #2 on: March 04, 2019, 20:56:42
Wow, Mora...what an interesting piece this is!!!!

Your image of lying on top (not bottom) of a well reminds me of a book called "The Wind Up Bird Chronicles" by Haruki Murakami....the well as a transcendent portal.

I must listen again before I say more!
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Re: The well
Reply #3 on: March 05, 2019, 14:08:49
Wow, Mora...what an interesting piece this is!!!!

Your image of lying on top (not bottom) of a well reminds me of a book called "The Wind Up Bird Chronicles" by Haruki Murakami....the well as a transcendent portal.

I must listen again before I say more!

Thank you @Leonard Scaper ,

 it would be great your comments about mix or whatever you think could be better. Personally, I love the lyrics that I made for this idea


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Re: The well
Reply #4 on: March 05, 2019, 14:41:50
I'll listen seriously tonight in the studio, Mora. Did not get a chance to last night.

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Re: The well
Reply #5 on: March 07, 2019, 13:14:53
you both are wonderful artists   ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: le gusto mucho  ::thumb::
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Re: The well
Reply #6 on: March 07, 2019, 18:53:52
@Mora Amaro La Loba , great music and great video  :o :o :o :o Amazing how many music tracks and videos you make

this one is supernice with a groovy, yet gentle, flow
it has a very hypnotising ritm and feel to it, in my opinion  8) 8) 8) 8) ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::   
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Re: The well
Reply #7 on: March 10, 2019, 12:28:25
« Last Edit: March 10, 2019, 12:34:26 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
you both are wonderful artists   ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: le gusto mucho  ::thumb::

Hola @Goatrelated ! Muchas gracias, thank you very much. See you soon  ::heart:: :loveit:


Re: The well
Reply #8 on: March 10, 2019, 12:33:58
@Mora Amaro La Loba , great music and great video  :o :o :o :o Amazing how many music tracks and videos you make

this one is supernice with a groovy, yet gentle, flow
it has a very hypnotising ritm and feel to it, in my opinion  8) 8) 8) 8) ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

Thank you @Dutchbeat
You are very kind... Yes I make a lot of work, I am lucky to be creative, imaginative, restless and hardworking, although I often suffer from emotional drought, whenever I dig, I find water. Good Sunday!!  :pompom:


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Re: The well
Reply #9 on: March 10, 2019, 14:32:33
Like it very well.
Keep digging please.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: The well
Reply #10 on: March 11, 2019, 15:26:17
Like it very well.
Keep digging please.
Kind regards, Gus

Gracias, merci, thank you @LePlongeur
and yes, I keep digging! ::thumb::


Re: The well
Reply #11 on: March 11, 2019, 21:59:39
« Last Edit: March 12, 2019, 23:21:41 by man of simple pleasures »
its remindind me of bowie’s blackstar stuff @Mora Amaro La Loba good stuff!
fly away and find my peace of mind...
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Re: The well
Reply #12 on: March 12, 2019, 23:10:35