The Writing's on the Wall

Hello there!

Very lovely song you have put together. I like the melody and the chords you have choosed, really good. The lyrics are also very well written.

Great job, lovely stuff

With love
Known as, Beppe

fischermans- Thanks for taking the time to comment! Thanks for complimenting my lyrics and my guitar playing...means a lot!

Dutchbeat- I must re-record the vocal track and the harmony track soon so and you will be very welcome to try and mix them together if you so wish! There is absolutely no pressure to do so though...entirely up to you! Thanks for getting back to me on this!

Marti- Thanks very much! Your words are so kind and I really appreciate you taking the time to write them. Thanks in particular for calling this work 'great songwriting'...that is just incredible for me to read...trust me!

Beppe- Wow, thanks for such positive words! Thanks for the big compliment on the lyrics! Thanks so much!

Hi guys,

Just to let you know that I have posted a second version of this song in the first post of this thread! It is my first ever attempt of doing any sort of harmony in a song...so please be kind!

Thanks,
P

Hi,

Lots of comments on this great song and the version I've listened to does have the harmony at the end.

Really good lyrics and I like your singing and accompaniment.

My only thought on this is that maybe the ending could have built a bit more just so it's a different from the rest of the song, especially as the last chorus repeats. Possibly the first part of the chorus, louder or more aggressive and then finish with the softer version of the chorus. A minor point though and just an opinion of course.

cheers

Jurgen

Hi,

Very nice tune. Like the overall downbeat mood.
I'd be tempted to raise the level of the harmonies. They sound good, they deserve to be a bit louder.

Digger

Hi Digger,

Thanks for your kind words on the harmonies...I have them low because Im brand new to harmonies and I suppose I was afraid of them distracting from the main melody! I must mess around with them again! Thanks

and i listened again,

this a lovely song in my opinion, a very nice experience listening to this for sure

really good, i think, Cruiser

Thanks Dutchbeat...your kind words, as always, are much appreciated!