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Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
on: September 02, 2020, 09:30:56
Hey All,

I released my debut music video just under two months ago, and I would love to have your honest feedback on it. I wrote, recorded, and produced the track entirely myself.

Here is a link to the video:

Thanks for your time and I hope you enjoy it!

Here are the lyrics below:

[Verse I]
Down by the river
I wrote this little song
It sounds a lot like this one
That you're hearing all day long
Turn on the TV
And turn up the radio
Winter just arrived
And now it's time for it to go

[Pre-Chorus]
I may be bored or I may be tired
I could be wrong but it's down to the wire
I tell ya things that ya wanna hear
But I'm sick of the pain you give me

[Chorus]
Dear
Dear
Dear
Dear

[Verse II]
Down by the river
I wrote this little tune
It sounds a lot like this one
That you're hearing in the afternoon

[Pre-Chorus]
I may be bored or I may be tired
I could be wrong but it's down to the wire
I tell ya things that ya wanna hear
But I'm sick of the pain you give me

[Chorus]
Dear
Dear
Dear
Dear

Sincerely,
Theodore Kidd


Re: Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
Reply #1 on: September 02, 2020, 14:30:09
I like this one @Theodorekidd . Your vocal presentation is perfect for the feeling of the lyrics and the song moves really nicely.

Good production as well......a pleasure to listen to.
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Re: Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
Reply #2 on: September 02, 2020, 18:45:23
@Theodorekidd  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

great track and a very nice mix! the balance of all the volumes in the mix sounds spot on! Also interesting images in the video with that...slightly psychadelic film effect

great songwriting!  ::thumb::
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Re: Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
Reply #3 on: September 03, 2020, 09:11:19
I like this one @Theodorekidd . Your vocal presentation is perfect for the feeling of the lyrics and the song moves really nicely.

Good production as well......a pleasure to listen to.

Thanks for your kind words, Leonard! It brings me pleasure knowing you like what you heard. I have plenty of new music on the way if you don't mind subscribing to stay updated! It's by no means necessary but would really help me out as well.

Do you have any projects to share?

Stay well!


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Re: Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
Reply #4 on: September 03, 2020, 09:12:08
@Theodorekidd  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

great track and a very nice mix! the balance of all the volumes in the mix sounds spot on! Also interesting images in the video with that...slightly psychadelic film effect

great songwriting!  ::thumb::

Thanks, Dutch! That really means a lot. Do you have anything to share?

I have plenty of new music on the way if you want to subscribe to stay updated! It would also really help me out as well.

Stay well.


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Re: Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
Reply #5 on: September 04, 2020, 16:24:12
Great song!

I love what you did with the chorus...drawing out the dear and the d-d-d-d-d-d-dear...really cool!

For some honest feedback, in my opinion, I would bring the chorus in a bit earlier. My instinct was that it should come in right after the  "...insane" line after the first verse. Maybe get rid of that "insane" part and go straight to the pre chorus?

I also think in the second verse you could switch it up...maybe tempo? or get a good beat going. Sing in a higher octave. Something for a cool switch and then the final chorus could sound really cool with some more backing vocals and instruments.

Again, just my opinion. And I think with a very pop mindset so take it all with a grain of salt.

But either way, I thoroughly enjoyed the listen and appreciate the uniqueness of your song and style. Would love to hear more!

-Micky


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Re: Theodore Kidd - Dear (Official Music Video)
Reply #6 on: September 05, 2020, 16:13:41
Great song!

I love what you did with the chorus...drawing out the dear and the d-d-d-d-d-d-dear...really cool!

For some honest feedback, in my opinion, I would bring the chorus in a bit earlier. My instinct was that it should come in right after the  "...insane" line after the first verse. Maybe get rid of that "insane" part and go straight to the pre chorus?

I also think in the second verse you could switch it up...maybe tempo? or get a good beat going. Sing in a higher octave. Something for a cool switch and then the final chorus could sound really cool with some more backing vocals and instruments.

Again, just my opinion. And I think with a very pop mindset so take it all with a grain of salt.

But either way, I thoroughly enjoyed the listen and appreciate the uniqueness of your song and style. Would love to hear more!

-Micky

Thanks, Micky! That really means a lot. I'll definitely keep all of that in mind.

I actually have a new music video coming out soon, and am working on it as we speak! If you don't mind subscribing to stay updated, it would really help me out as well.

Is there anywhere I can check out your music?

Thanks for your time and stay well.



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