• "Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
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"Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
on: January 06, 2019, 18:20:23
I'm new here, and my first attempt to post this song with a streaming link was not well received.  So, here is a Youtube video, which should be more fun anyway.  This was written for music licensing, and I would appreciate any feedback people have on the songwriting before we think about recording it.  Here's a Youtube link and the lyrics:



Thanks!

Together - James Woolwine, Augustine Altomare

Verse 1
Left, right, march ahead. We’re an army that’ll run you over
step high, with big smiles while the world’s on our shoulders
we can make your ground shake like a freakin’ earthquake
there’s no storm we can’t weather when we are together

Chorus
Together, Together
Together we’re strong    we can’t lose
Together we’ll find a way   to break through 
As one we     stand,     hand in hand
Now hear our chorus     the swell of a thousand voices

Verse 2
Won’t    back    down, that’s just not in our code
U-ni-fied we’ll stop anything you throw
All for one and one for all, we make each other better
We can be something great, that will last forever when we stand…

Chorus
Bridge
We’re growing, we’re growing, stronger

Chorus
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Re: "Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
Reply #1 on: January 06, 2019, 19:41:29
it is a very catchy song @jameswoolwine 
indeed
nice video too
the song in my ears has a lot of potential for making that into a catchy radio friendly song, i think
a dance mix too, it sounds good to me, i already said that, but would be nice to hear this song into a full production
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Re: "Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
Reply #2 on: January 06, 2019, 19:43:42
Thanks a lot Dutchbeat!!


Re: "Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
Reply #3 on: January 07, 2019, 19:05:45
Happy 2019 and welcome @jameswoolwine

Your song is very nice to listen to and the construction is logical and catchy although I think like @Dutchbeat, with a complete arrangement it would be fantastic.
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https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow


Re: "Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
Reply #4 on: January 08, 2019, 02:00:34
Thanks Mora!


Re: "Together" repost, with Youtube link this time
Reply #5 on: January 09, 2019, 22:04:35
The work has an innocence in its general context that I love
Congratulations
Simplicity is something that is never lost if one is not ashamed of it.