• Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
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Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
on: February 19, 2021, 22:38:50
https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/too-vanilla-demo19-2-2021-aud-mr/s-8ZZkVOzGyDp
a demo for @LePlongeur 's  FAWM - Project- not sure if the tempo is okay - may be too slow, and thefore a bit flat or dull. So not sure if this is a keeper.

Babe, do you think I'm too vanilla?
You want something rough,
like King Kong or Godzilla?
The sign on my screen
says I'm wasting my time.
You seek a crown for your coronation:
You're all over the place,
but you're nowhere.
Scratching my head,
How did you go so rogue
and turned so bad?
I guess I'm just
too vanilla


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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #1 on: February 21, 2021, 01:45:10
Very interesting.............has a Beatles playfulness to it that I like......bright stuff going on that is Beatlesc, too..
I really like the groove.
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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #2 on: February 21, 2021, 01:53:11
Superb @oorlab  relaxing feel, clever lyrics, solid production  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: :praise: :praise: :praise:


Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #3 on: February 21, 2021, 13:59:30
« Last Edit: February 21, 2021, 15:51:13 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #4 on: February 21, 2021, 18:54:49
This song for sure has your special fine musically fingerprint all over ,I like very much the background vocals here, it's just pity that the lyrics still a bit short but maybe it will extend while developing. I hope ! :)


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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #5 on: February 21, 2021, 22:36:40
@Mo  thanks for the feedback. I am still tinkering on the lyrics, even thinking about changing the title, but keeping the phrasing of the text in the melody.
Stillone week to go for finishing it #FAWM.


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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #6 on: February 21, 2021, 22:45:43
Not sure if it will fit , but this small lines came spontaneously in my mind.

What do you need for evidence
Who is  too vanilla,
Or who's stupid with much arrogance.


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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #7 on: February 22, 2021, 07:08:56
Yessssss, beautifully done.
With 222 running time maybe a bit short, but I love it already.
Great entry @oorlab


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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #8 on: February 22, 2021, 23:24:37
@Mo @LePlongeur thanks for the feedback.
I made a new version, mostly changed the lyrics. Still short - 'I could make it longer if you like the style' to quote Paperback writer :-)
Not sure about the title - either: Tinder Tender, or Future lovers, or keep "Too Vanilla" (I had a PM exchange of ideas with @Pleudoniem  about that option.

All comments welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/tinder-tender/s-ahqTQCXaRfE

Babe, do you think I'm too tinder tender
While unsure of one another's gender?
The sign on my screen
says I'm wasting my time.
You seek a crown for your coronation
You're all over the place
but you're nowhere
Scratching my head
How did we end up like this
Turned so bad
You could say it's all too vanilla

The Future lovers
Real, not on screen
No digital touching
Not selling a dream
You could say it's a love guerilla
Even think it's all too vanilla
We better stick to the match algorithm.


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Re: Too vanilla (demo for FAWM)
Reply #9 on: March 01, 2021, 23:44:55
https://soundcloud.com/oorlab/tinder-tender public version  for this track - title is now Tinder tender.
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