• Unicycle (writing prompt) - What May BE Planned
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My acoustic sketch for the unicycle prompt writing exercise.  I hope you enjoy listening.

https://soundcloud.com/pvasey1/what-may-be-planned

What May Be Planned

You taught me well,
Look at me now.
My feet won't touch the ground,
I'll cycle hard then I will  bow.

I balance well
but look ahead
The storm clouds gather purposely.
They stretch above my head.

See the road to the future,
my fate in her hands.
I'm strong in this moment
yet, I don't understand
what may be planned.

Set me free.
I'm good to go.
I wish to learn the lessons
not yet known that I must know.

If I should fall,
I'll be the same.
A snapshot of experience
within this earthly frame.

I'm strong in this moment
yet, I don't understand
What may be planned,
what may be planned

Let me dance in the rain, avoid the mundane.
I am not afraid to cycle over this terrain.
Yet I don't understand what  may be planned,
what may be planned.

Written by Paul Vasey March 2021

https://soundcloud.com/pvasey1/what-may-be-planned


Re: Unicycle (writing prompt) - What May BE Planned
Reply #1 on: April 05, 2021, 01:51:40
Really nicely played and sung with a very poignant lyrical message.

Nice listen for me at the end of a day in the studio.
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Re: Unicycle (writing prompt) - What May BE Planned
Reply #2 on: April 05, 2021, 20:10:23
Oh how nicely  thought into the picture and the girl! ::thumb:: :)
Well done!


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Re: Unicycle (writing prompt) - What May BE Planned
Reply #3 on: April 08, 2021, 14:20:31
This is both fun and philosophical.
The fun part is that everybody comes up with something that different. Because everybody sees something else in the prompt.
And the philosophical part is that everybody comes up with something that different. Because everybody sees something else in the prompt.
Smiley!

I think you may have thought up the most original reaction. Very nicely done!
Kind regards, Gus




Re: Unicycle (writing prompt) - What May BE Planned
Reply #4 on: April 08, 2021, 19:26:02
A beautiful piece Paul. I love the guitar and the delicate vocal delivery. The lyrics come over as heartfelt and sincere. No crits from me here. I really enjoyed the listen. :)



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