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Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
on: October 30, 2014, 21:27:54
A new song which try to describe a night in an Urban backyard.Hope you like.

https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/urban-backyard-301014-2033

Urban Backyard   Kapo 4   Oktober 2014

Verse 1
Urban lights
shine through the night
sleeples violence
floating silence
moon shine
between neon lights
whispering tears
unspoken fears

Bridge
Bars and cars
urban gardens
whispering TV's
outcryes for sleep
engines sounds
dreams about speed
thousand voices
forged by noices

Chorus
Urban nights
feels so right
thousands of thoughts
lost in the night
daydreams in darkness
awake for hours
one whistling loudless
from nobody heard

Verse 2
Urban lights
shine through the night
bars closing
daylight awakes
garbage trucks
raise the dust
broken hopes
stolen dreams

Bridge
Bars and cars ?.

Chorus
Urban nights ?.

Verse 3
Urban lights
gone after night
alone again
missing my dreams
search for salvation
on emty streets
no word to no one
silent through my own run
emotions so deep
try to sleep

Bridge
Bars and cars ?.

Chorus
Urban nights ?.

? Voice, Words and Music Alexander Fisch aka fischermans ?


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #1 on: October 30, 2014, 23:05:16
cool
i like it very much!

very much, yes
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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #2 on: October 31, 2014, 07:42:39
Thank you dutch. ;)


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #3 on: October 31, 2014, 13:24:35
yes, that is very smooth, i like that continuing guitar tinkeling sound
very, very soothing and smooth

and coming up with a video for this one is easier  ;D ;D ;D ;D


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Reply #4 on: November 01, 2014, 14:15:00
This is lovely... just lovely and I too love the simple arrangement with guitar... Really like the format of the lyrics too - like an urban nights shopping list!! (I mean that as a compliment - it might read a little strange...)!

Soothing is spot on - great description of it...

I shall listen again....



Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #5 on: November 01, 2014, 23:05:39
Very lovely Ficsh :) really descriptive lyrics...they certainly bring a picture of this Urban backyard into the mind, and the hypnotic guitar and singing are perfect :) very nice indeed :)


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #6 on: November 03, 2014, 16:26:01
@Dutch
A video would be cool. :o
@Zedd
Thank you for your words.  :)
@crystalsuzy
Thank you Suzy you made my day.  :-* :-*
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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #7 on: November 03, 2014, 17:11:20
ah, Fisch that is nice

because i already have some good home made footage for this shot with my new camera...

this is a video that i can do with very, very, very  ;D ;D ;D ;D exclusive DB material with ok (HD) quality now

so your song will be the first experiment with the new cam  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #8 on: November 18, 2014, 15:05:08
Alexander,

these wonderful open guitar chords of yours get me everytime  :) So beautiful!
Especially the parts at 1:40 and 3:22 when you get back to just the softly strummed guitar... lovely

Two questions for you, if you don't mind:
Do you use a lot of EQ to get the guitar tracks to sound like this, or is this how the mics pick it up? I LOVE your guitar sound...
And: Which guitar strings are you using?

Lyrically I think it's quite impressive the way you paint this picture with a rather simple lyrical structure, good job!

I found the vocal melody was maybe a bit too repetitive for my taste.
But the vocal delivery... once again flawless - really getting under my skin :)


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #9 on: November 18, 2014, 18:00:56
yes it is really good (listening again), nice....

but hey, Fisch......you didn't number this song...all your songs have a number.....did you loose count of the number of songs you made  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D


i really like this, also would like to hear a basic bass line and relaxed bongos or simple percussion with this, that would work nice i think

oh, and...if you think: why not??? what a silly idea but let's try it...

you have my e-mail address  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #10 on: November 18, 2014, 20:15:20
Hey Michael
Thanks for the "flowers". :)
For your questions:
The guitar is picked up into garageband and there I use a filter which is called acoustic guitar natural stereo.Here is a screenshot:
Guitar strings are Gibson 12 light: https://www.amazon.com/Gibson-Masterbuilt-Premium-Phosphor-Acoustic/dp/B0002E1TB8
But I think the sound is good because it's a fantastic guitar what I have.
Hope this helps. ;)
Alexander


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #11 on: November 18, 2014, 20:17:26
Hey dutch feel free and add whatever you want. ;)


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #12 on: November 18, 2014, 20:26:08
But I think the sound is good because it's a fantastic guitar what I have.
Yes, I'm still considering breaking into your place to steal that beauty... it's an SJ200, isn't it?  :)


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #13 on: November 18, 2014, 20:30:30
cool  ;D ;D ;D ;D
but...i am still wondering, what number this song has...Fisch


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Re: Urban Backyard new ><(((?> song
Reply #14 on: November 18, 2014, 20:51:37
Hey Michael I have a SJ 200 but for recording I use a SJ 300 Custom a real beauty.Better you don't steal it because I'll find you wherever you are. ;D ;D
Better you visit me and you can play this beauty. ;)



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