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on: March 11, 2021, 10:28:11
For the most part my lady friend put the music together with myself n' I produced it
Her brother, a poet wrote the words.
It was a struggle to keep all contributors happy, so much so. it'll be unlikely I'll produce in this way again.
Compromises! lol. I like the track though!!

Feedback would be great!!!

link

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/wolves-6

Lyrics

wolves

we fall back on clichés at times like this,
I'd rather fall back with you instead,
on to the footpath, we could talk things over,
a forest of people moving over head
but you don't want a little world,
an everywhere scenario, or not with me, not now

besides your hurrying for work and the words we use,
aren't words so much as cries,
just random sounds for all the stuff
we can't talk about, not yet,
but you don't want a little world,
an everywhere scenario, or not with me, not now

not words so much as wolves
they hide behind the sunlit city buildings,
getting closer, dodging through the traffic and the crowds,
they gather in a circle round us,
howling, howling, howling, and when you leave,
they follow me back home


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Rightly, Ciaran, Aine

(more from Aine - https://soundcloud.com/aineparkes/tracks

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Re: w o l v e s
Reply #1 on: March 16, 2021, 12:54:04
Wow...somehow I missed this fine collaborative piece. I love the haunting quality of your lady's voice and how the other vocals sneak in to support it. This may have been a challenge for you but I would say it was well worth it to have produced something with such a wonderfully layered presence.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

Lenny's Tunes: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=540680

https://soundcloud.com/vincentgleason


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Re: w o l v e s
Reply #2 on: March 16, 2021, 23:34:58
Wow...somehow I missed this fine collaborative piece. I love the haunting quality of your lady's voice and how the other vocals sneak in to support it. This may have been a challenge for you but I would say it was well worth it to have produced something with such a wonderfully layered presence.

thanks leonard
somehow I can't see it other as a stepping stone
I'm playful, I need to advance
long way to go!