• Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
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Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
on: April 03, 2022, 18:21:33
« Last Edit: April 03, 2022, 18:23:10 by Mo »
Hello Ladies and Gentlemen ::dj::

Relatively spontaneously, another song has emerged in collaboration with @Charlys-Music .
It is sung mainly in German but maybe someone might listen to it anyway and tell us how the overall impression is?

I wish everyone a nice Sunday and many beautiful spring walks in the forest and park.


https://soundcloud.com/user-65096772/walking-in-park-mo-charlys-music-collab


Lyrics:

Walk in Park

Zeit zugehen, meinen 4 Wänden den Rücken kehren
Die Tür fällt hinter mir ins Schloß
Kann mich der Winterschwere nicht mehr erwehren
Die zuletzt erdrückend in mir überfloss
Pandemie,  Kontakt-Restriktion und monetäre Sorgen
Das machte es am Ende ziemlich schwer
Du bist fort, ich war nicht mehr geborgen
Was blieb war Winter, kalt und leer

I'll go for walk in park
On this first warm day
Leave behind the dark
Watch how colors fade the grey

Ein Krähenpaar auf der Mauer, holt mich aus den Gedanken
Vor mir liegt der ruhige, grüne Park
Hör' sie laut doch wohlig, krächzend zanken
um den besten Sonnenplatz an diesem milden Tag.
Das Gras scheint grüner und tiefer blau der kleine Teich
Prächtige Enten sitzen auf dem Steg
Plötzlich werden meine Knie weich
Vom krassen Duft des Mirabellenbaums am Weg.


I go for walk in park
On this first warm day
Leave behind the dark
Watch how colors fade the grey


Schmetterlinge, Hummel brummen, Bienen summen
Mausohrblätter drängen sich durch braune Äste
Ich saug Frühlingsluft in meine Lungen
Sonne trinken fänd ich jetzt das Beste
Wie zum Schrei
Das Gesicht nach oben öffne ich den Mund
Erspür den Sonnenstrahl – jedes Detail
 die Welt um mich herum wird bunt

I walk in the park
On this first warm day
Leave behind the dark
Watch how colors fade the grey




English translation with www.DeepL.com/Translator (free version)

Walk in Park

Time to go, turn my back on my 4 walls
The door slams shut behind me
Can no longer resist the winter heaviness
That recently overflowed oppressively in me
Pandemic, contact restriction and monetary worries
That made it pretty hard in the end
You are gone, I was no longer safe
What remained was winter, cold and empty

I'll go for walk in park
On this first warm day
Leave behind the dark
Watch how colors fade the grey

A pair of crows on the wall, brings me out of my thoughts
Before me lies the quiet, green park
I hear them squabbling loudly but soothingly
for the best place in the sun on this mild day.
The grass seems greener and deeper blue the small pond
Splendid ducks sit on the jetty
Suddenly my knees go soft
From the crisp scent of the mirabelle tree by the path.


I go for walk in park
On this first warm day
Leave behind the dark
Watch how colors fade the grey


Butterflies, bumblebees buzz, bees hum
Mouse-ear leaves push through brown branches
I suck spring air into my lungs
Drinking the sun would be the best thing now
As if to scream
Face up I open my mouth
Feel the sunbeam - every detail
 the world around me becomes colorful

I walk in the park
On this first warm day
Leave behind the dark
Watch how colors fade the grey


Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #1 on: April 03, 2022, 18:40:44
« Last Edit: April 03, 2022, 19:15:30 by Charlys-Music »
Thank you Mo for this last-minute and absolutely spontaneous collaboration. Was fun again to create something together with you  :thumbsup:



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Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #2 on: April 03, 2022, 18:55:15
My pleasure! @Charlys-Music
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Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #3 on: April 04, 2022, 02:25:35
@Mo 
@Charlys-Music

These pieces you are creating together, just sounds like the perfect match-up, your collaboration here is so amazing ! Almost 8 minutes, and I enjoyed every second . . . so many musical journeys, and brilliant orchestrations along the way. The vocal in German is outstanding, best recording of Mo's voice I have heard. Thanks for the English translation, I knew it would be  lyrical poetry. As I'm sitting here on this cold rainy Sunday, I was transported to a future spring.


Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #4 on: April 04, 2022, 07:08:50
@Mo 
@Charlys-Music

These pieces you are creating together, just sounds like the perfect match-up, your collaboration here is so amazing ! Almost 8 minutes, and I enjoyed every second . . . so many musical journeys, and brilliant orchestrations along the way. The vocal in German is outstanding, best recording of Mo's voice I have heard. Thanks for the English translation, I knew it would be  lyrical poetry. As I'm sitting here on this cold rainy Sunday, I was transported to a future spring.

Thank you very much for your feedback. It's nice to read when our music is heard. Stories are there to be told, vocally and musically.

It's amazing how creative a person like Mo has to be to sing so special and good on a finished music like I gave her. My greatest respect belongs to her for it


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Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #5 on: April 04, 2022, 19:45:47
« Last Edit: April 04, 2022, 19:56:04 by LePlongeur »
When translating stuff from German to English, a very famous poem by Kees Stip comes to mind.

It’s called ‘Op een made’

Dutch:
Kees Stip - "op een made"
Dit weekend ging een groepje maden
In Scheveningen pootjebaden.
De welbespraaktste van het stel
Sprak: “Makkers, merken jullie wel?
Er zijn hier heel wat maden bij
Die made zijn in Germanij.”

And translated by Deepl (normally accurate. Normally it is. But not now.)
Kees Stip - "on a made"
This weekend a group of maggots went
Paddling in Scheveningen.
The most eloquent of the bunch
Said, "Mates, do you notice?
There are a lot of maggots here
That are made in Germanij."

And than to think that I repaired some things.

I am going to listen to it in German, if you don’t mind. Translating is not the way to go for Kees Stip. Sooooooo….

I’ll be back in a sec.

So, this is yet another beautiful story.
Maria auf Der Maur was/is one of my fave bass players. So it will be crowded on the wall.
Over 7 minutes of sheer beauty. What a way to close the Monday.

I’ll be back later to listen again! @Mo @Charlys-Music
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #6 on: April 05, 2022, 02:30:21
Epic!  @Mo  and @Charlys-Music

And thank you for featuring the lyrics and thus the vocals... great dramatic storytelling... the English translation is captivating.  :praise:


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Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #7 on: April 05, 2022, 16:01:40
Thank you  so much for your encouraging words
@popitup @Charlys-Music  @LePlongeur  @1roomstudio


Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #8 on: April 05, 2022, 19:03:20
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I loved the intro!!! Singing in German? Why not? All language is music. In addition, your voice does very well, it is a contrast with the softness of the backing music!!!
You are still in a very good moment and that is great, I think you are a discovery in this forum.
Good job both of you, very nice arrangement @Mo @Charlys-Music  Muy bueno!!!!!

Cuídate  ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::

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Re: Walk In Park ( collab with Charlys-Music)
Reply #9 on: April 06, 2022, 16:22:24
Thank you so much for listening; @Mora Amaro La Loba
Hola @Mo
In addition, your voice does very well, it is a contrast with the softness of the backing music!!!
You are still in a very good moment and that is great, I think you are a discovery in this forum.

Exactly, this contrast was intentional and was therefore somewhat exaggerated.
Aren't we all a discovery here?? ::dj:: ;D

Best wishes!
Mo ::heart::



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