• Wandering Wondering
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Wandering Wondering
on: July 06, 2019, 03:49:44
https://soundcloud.com/dmsound-2/wandering-wondering

Lyrics:

Heather I did my best did you do yours?
Well hindsight is crashing down
Thinking that we left things feeling unsure, well if I could only find out
Even now, even now I'm lost and my cards are folding
Even now, even now we are just strangers that once met
Had to tell myself to calm right down, five minutes after we shook hands
But that time has gone, and I get lonely, lonely, only if I thought that you wouldn't remember my name
If we ever saw each other again, I hope we do
My friends ask me what happened to that girl?
Oh I know that one, the bartending gal with the short brown hair
Seems her home town took her in and swallowed her up whole, can she make it out?
Hope she does, hope she does somehow, for my own selfish reasons
Had to tell myself to calm right down, five minutes after we shook hands
But that time has gone, and I get lonely, lonely, because I don't think that you'd remember my name
Oh the ghosts of our past keep wandering, wondering





Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #1 on: July 06, 2019, 13:57:19
Nice song.........I like the delicate playing and the emotive vocals.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #2 on: July 08, 2019, 03:03:31
@Leonard Scaper thank you!


Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #3 on: July 08, 2019, 16:43:59
This is beautiful mate, love the line even though I lost and my cards are folding.


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Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #4 on: July 09, 2019, 00:24:11
Super title! and intruiging background singing in the outro. Delicate song, well done @DMsoundz
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Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #5 on: July 09, 2019, 00:38:37
@realkevm & @oorlab thank you both for the feedback! cheers!


Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #6 on: July 09, 2019, 06:58:55
Pretty song with a nice mood... really pretty guitar playing. Very down to Earth... like a friend playing and singing in your living room.... real and intimate.


Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #7 on: July 09, 2019, 21:25:14
Nice chords and musical mood. I read the lyrics first. There's a sweet story in there. And I really like the very last line. Pretty song!!  :)
Do what makes your heart sing :)


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Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #8 on: July 10, 2019, 01:03:22
Very nice @DMsoundz - the words tell a story and the vocals have so much emotion and feeling.

I also like the recording as it has a rawness to it which suits the song.

Nice one!

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Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #9 on: July 10, 2019, 03:41:45
@1roomstudio @Kellyanneg @Jurgen thanks so much for listening and for providing the wonderful comments!


Re: Wandering Wondering
Reply #10 on: July 13, 2019, 14:32:58
I liked the very natural sound in your song and the lyrics @DMsoundz .. Love and its scenes...!
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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