• War Within (I produced, wrote, recorded and mixed this today in 3 hours)
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I don't even know what genre i am anymore... lol






That sounds great and I also found the video strangely interesting.  I am not really a fan of categorising music too much and why restrict ones self to any genre .   But if I must I will categories this as good music:)


I really like what you do @Neal ! Who needs a genre?
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@DavidHutton  @Leonard Scaper

Thank you very much gents.

And yes, I don't want to be boxed in!


Hola @Neal

Good production, good mix, good rhythm, good voice.
it's a catchy song and if you shared the lyrics it would be great.

I really liked the voice acting and the effects. ::thumb:: ::thumb::


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Thanks @Mora Amaro La Loba

I'll try and get the lyrics up for this soon!


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@Neal , Congratulations on your 3 hour marathon - I love the result! The track does have its differences from your previous songs but there are still constants within, that bear your stamp and link all your creations together. I like the fact that all your words have a certain presence/prominance in the way in which they are written and sung which makes the listener follow and appreciate the message. (Perhaps the latter is one of those constants and best traits). I dig the positive message in the lyrics, the play with the sound of words (such as 'man in the mirror'), the staccato effect in the verses, the cool rhythm & percussions and the title. I really enjoyed your track. Thanks for sharing! :)
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@Rachel_D

That's actually some of the best feedback I've ever received. Thank you so much. That means a lot!


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Hi @Neal , that is a fabulous track in my opinion, the ritmic flow of the words with the music is very nice....super nice even  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

the only small think i can pick on is the abrupt ending, perhaps, the song could have a more grande and escalating last bit, to match the "war within"?

great song!!!!
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@Neal  - written, recorded & mixed in 3 hours! That his very  impressive. If I'd hear this on a radio programme I would not think it out of place. I join with @Mora Amaro La Loba  's request for the lyrics, if possible.
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This is something special.


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@Dutchbeat @oorlab @CGHound

Appreciate the kind words. Thanks so much for taking the time to check it out. I'll get the lyrics up right away



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