• were do we go(demo)
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were do we go(demo)
on: May 26, 2019, 20:36:22
hi guys i haven't posted any new songs for a while  but here,s a new song i finished today  hope you enjoy....tony

https://soundcloud.com/tony-mcvey/were-do-we-go


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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #1 on: May 27, 2019, 03:47:40
Hi @Macker71165

Nice song - I especially like the "where do we go from here" sections. Very catchy.

The mix seems a little varied in places. Sometimes your vocal is loud in the mix and during the chorus and bridge it's much lower.

eg: at 2.15 - that's a powerful section but vocals are lower than what comes at 3.05.

I like the guitar riff that's playing under the chorus - that works really well.

It could be my headphones - or my ears! But I think this would really benefit from a remix so that everyone is a bit more even. Maybe it needs a different mastering process?

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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #2 on: May 27, 2019, 10:55:13
Good song....I like the way it's structured. It moves nicely. I also like the vocal arrangement from chorus to lyrics.......I'd love to see the lyrics.

I do agree with @Jurgen about the mix. If that's important to you you might take a look at your vocals......there is a bit of a disconnect between them and the backing track. It's not easy to get that relationship right with a driving song like this.

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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #3 on: May 27, 2019, 11:50:10
« Last Edit: May 27, 2019, 12:23:18 by Macker71165 »
thnx guys.. i have raise them in the mix.... yeh  you are right its just i hate my voice   and singing in my small bedroom  (dont want too annoy the neighbours :ok: :ok:  ha ha  i get self conscious  singing aint my forte ::OSMAN::  thnx for the feed back....tony  i have raise them in the mix


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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #4 on: May 27, 2019, 16:29:27
Love to hear the music the neighbors make. Bet they donít do shit.
I love to lower the voice in the mix, but then again, I always get comments that my voice is too low. So what do I know.

A lovely song.
What else can we ask for on a songwriterís forum?
Love it, @Macker71165 .
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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #5 on: May 27, 2019, 16:58:56
Hi @Macker71165

Good song, if you could get the instrumental base to sound a little louder to wrap more your voice would be great !!!
It is very nice to hear.
Ah! It would also be great to be able to read your lyrics!! ::thumb::
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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #6 on: May 27, 2019, 18:08:41
Hi @Macker71165 that is a great song in my opinion, a very enjoyable listen  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::
and your voice sounds good too  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

congratulations on this track  :thumbsup: ::dj::
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Re: were do we go(demo)
Reply #7 on: May 28, 2019, 16:34:38
Yes, it was the title that made me want to hear what the song was saying. you have a very interesting song. easy to listen to. thanks for sharing.

Irwin



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