• What I Need
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What I Need
on: November 25, 2019, 12:31:39
Hi guys here's a new rock n roll tune, please let me know what you think to the riff and the chorus if you have a couple of minutes. It's a demo so nothing special in terms of production. 

Lyrics

I can feel it growing in my head
I can feel it flowing through my veins
Cos this dreamer never ever left
I know how it feels to be in the morning rain

I don't know here i'm going baby
I just know where i've been
And if you're not what I want
You sure are what I need
Tear down the walls in here
Give me space to breathe
Open up your heart and soul
And your arms to me

I can see the sun shining down on me
I can see the world for what it is
Cos one match will burn a thousand trees
and I know how it feels to..miss



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Re: What I Need
Reply #1 on: November 25, 2019, 21:13:28
Here's what I think @realkevm ....I think you need to get the band together .

The way you play that electric guitar screams out for a 3-piece power group thing. I could hear the band coming in on that chorus with crashing drums and a massive bass supporting you.
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Re: What I Need
Reply #2 on: November 26, 2019, 04:36:09
yup gotta agree with @Leonard Scaper - this needs a band

The guitar is almost too much (I know it's a demo) but it's hard to hear the riff clearly as so much distortion - which with a band would be fine as the bass and drums would bring it to life.

When just you and a guitar it might need a little less distortion.

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Re: What I Need
Reply #3 on: November 26, 2019, 17:34:03
hi @realkevm , a nice and different sound you got in this, sounds good  :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

but indeed, i was also thinking it would be great if there would be pretty over-the-top drums added to this this track
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Re: What I Need
Reply #4 on: December 03, 2019, 15:32:31
Thanks guys, it is screaming out for some drums and a guitar solo isn't it? I really appreciate you having a listen!