• Where I Belong
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Where I Belong
on: April 22, 2022, 17:54:57
« Last Edit: April 23, 2022, 17:49:05 by gman97040 »
Just Looking for general feedback.  It's a starting point so good time for feedback.

 {Verse 1}

Driving down 84 like a million times before  the sun was sinking low on an early Fall's day
Radio playing on singing that old song the one that always to takes me back to yesterday

{Chorus}

Funny as it all flies by moving faster all the time wish I could slow it down so I could reflect
Lord knows right and wrong can be confusing to some I just shake my head And follow my heart
I知 not where I thought be but I知 where I belong

{Verse 2}

Tried to make the best of what I had in front me by most people standards I知 doing OK
Don't get me wrong so far from being strong  I've had my moments of anger and pain

{Chorus}

Funny as it all flies by moving faster all the time wish I could slow it down so I could reflect
Lord knows right and wrong can be confusing to some I just shake my head And follow my heart
I知 not where I thought be but I知 where I belong

Solo

{Chorus}

Funny as it all flies by moving faster all the time wish I could slow it down so I could reflect
Lord knows right and wrong can be confusing to some I just shake my head And follow my heart
I知 not where I thought be but I知 where I belong







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Re: Where I Belong
Reply #1 on: April 23, 2022, 19:42:41
It could very well be my 奏hing about balance, so I really hope that more civilised kitcheners post their ideas.
If you壇 lower the voice dramatically, I値l play the song till the sun goes down.

I think this is really a lovely song @gman97040 and I really shouldn稚 bother you with my oldies but mouldiest ideas about how the voice just another instrument.

Is it your first song here or wasn稚 I paying attention?
Anyway.
Maybe I値l be back to give it another spin.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Where I Belong
Reply #2 on: April 23, 2022, 20:17:47
Hola @gman97040

It is a good song, very balanced and pleasant to listen to.
The voice, when pissing in my headphones, sounds with excess treble, maybe it could use a little more mid-bass and lower the treble?
It has been a very pleasant listening.

Stay well

Mora
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Re: Where I Belong
Reply #3 on: April 24, 2022, 13:38:34
I like this.

Regarding @LePlongeur 's comment about the vocal........maybe just take the edge off it a little with some EQ to tuck it in a bit better.
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