• Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #15 on: January 04, 2019, 20:51:29
« Last Edit: January 05, 2019, 01:40:44 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
Hahaha
I liked a lot the intro, a lot,  and the sound.

Your "LePlongeur" style and this song fit very well with you although I would have liked you to take more advantage of the second voice when it doubles the lead.

Regarding the lyrics, I've been perplexed and thoughtful about the infusions ... hahaha

Very funny song @LePlongeur
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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #16 on: January 05, 2019, 07:26:29
Glad you like it, @Mora Amaro La Loba !
Itís an approach I like very much, the funny comment on everyday things.
And since this is a challenge, I canít really admit it, but in real life I like the differences. It makes for stronger teams.

Thanks for listening!
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #17 on: January 06, 2019, 15:41:23
Oh man, @LePlongeur , this is very cool! Lyrically nailed it IMO Ö "Whiplash" is a great title and a great hook!  It is always better to agree and the misunderstandings abound in the verses.
I don't know about that herbal tea thing. ::) My wife drinks that stuff every night so... I guess I have to leave it there.....  :-X  :yawnee: :sleepy:

I really like the classic rock guitar lines that make for a great intro and interlude. You do know how to build a song! Nice driving rhythm, nice happy positive vibes, jangly tambourine, barky snare drum, warm open guitar chords, too much to list, really....
My only suggestion is that the song is about the lyrics - so if we could EQ things in a way to get the vocals a bit more clarity it would be even more awesome! (But, that is a small thing.) Good show!

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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #18 on: January 06, 2019, 16:25:46
« Last Edit: January 08, 2019, 20:34:34 by LePlongeur »
A mug full everyday? You're blessed! (You already knew that, didn't you?)
And be sure to count your blessings. You know what they say in biology class: Use it or loose it.
That's worse than a Whiplash.
I like it that you like it.
@Bill from November Sound  (forgot to mention you - sorry!)
I think it's a pity you didn't join.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #19 on: January 08, 2019, 20:29:43
6 minutes of epicness! @LePlongeur
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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #20 on: January 08, 2019, 20:37:46
6 minutes of epicness! @LePlongeur

Thank you very very much for your comment. I like your music very much so it really means a lot that you like my entry!
Thanks for listening and I look forward to hearing something from you again!
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #21 on: January 11, 2019, 00:45:48
Defintely liked! Interesting build-up in the interplay between guitars and vocals.  Very catchy!
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #22 on: January 11, 2019, 08:44:43
Defintely liked! Interesting build-up in the interplay between guitars and vocals.  Very catchy!

Thank you @oorlab !
Itís very nice to get compliments for things that were made purely out of fun.
I like it a lot that you like it.
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #23 on: January 14, 2019, 00:54:02
Hehehe, yes the misunderstandings between men and women.. Great choice for a misunderstandings challenge, lol! Nice work, had fun listening to it!
Good luck in the challenge man!!
Cheers!
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Re: Whiplash II - the Misunderstandings challenge 2018
Reply #24 on: January 14, 2019, 07:39:01
Hehehe, yes the misunderstandings between men and women.. Great choice for a misunderstandings challenge, lol! Nice work, had fun listening to it!
Good luck in the challenge man!!
Cheers!
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Thank you very much @Mar T. !
I feel a bit responsible for the challenge, since the language of flowers (Zeg het met bloemen) was the cause of it.
And thanks for wishing me good luck and all. It boosts my self esteem!  I am in the top 10 already!
Thanks for putting all the work in it too.
Kind regards, Gus



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