• 'will u be alright?' new song
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'will u be alright?' new song
on: March 16, 2019, 01:52:45
Hi everyone i feel really bad because I haven't posted on here in a while, I have been caught up and busy with school and studying but I hope to comment and interact more!! i wrote this song yesterday and posted it yesterday just to see what people thought of it as a beginning verse/part of a chorus kind of.  :makeitup:
Heres the link: https://soundcloud.com/amber-matelski-rose/will-u-be-alright
i wrote this in my chemistry class when i was feeling down and it helped me a little bit :)
Also I do have songs on my soundcloud that are longer than 1 minute  :shinyteeth: i just sometimes have quick little ideas that i feel like recording

I really appreciate you guys for taking the time to listen to mine and everyones songs/performances and ideas on this forum, a very safe creative place for everyone

Lyrics:
dont wanna lie anymore
i wanna be myself
im nothin better than the last guy

i cant cry anymore
i cant be myself
i try to laugh but it dont last long

dont bother, dont try to see my side
"im fine" as i waste away my life
theres somethin sad about my last goodbye
will it be the last or baby will you be alright?
will you be alright?
baby will you be alright


Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #1 on: March 16, 2019, 02:22:41
Hi @1AmberRose1  good to hear you again! Welcome back!
You got a super cool and modern vocal delivery! I really feel these lyrics ... you want to be who you are but it's hard to be yourself when you don't know who yourself is even supposed to be. ....  This is a very fine song idea in my opinion. 
Alright 'nuff said here. Keep it up. We want to hear more!
Good show!
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Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #2 on: March 16, 2019, 02:59:10
@1AmberRose1 I really like your voice! I love the first verse of this song...it's a great opening verse. I also listened to "Far Too Gone" on your soundcloud and thought it sounded great. Your voice is unique and very enjoyable to listen to.
Do what makes your heart sing :)


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Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #3 on: March 16, 2019, 09:32:09
You may have been flying. In a commercial plane, I mean?
Then you know these people instruct you to put on your own oxygen mask on first, before helping anyone else.
So, answering your song, my text would be:
Knowing that you take good care of yourself, I feel a whole lot better.
And I would be even more alright if you'd post something more than barely a minute of beauty.

Btw, have you ever listened to Taimane Gardner, the queen of ukelele?
I bet you'd love that. A bit showy perhaps, but ahhhhh......, the sheer beauty of it.

I wait for spring to arrive and could do with a lot more of your music to forget about the rain. There's rain and a gale for over a week now.
I need loads of sunshine music to make up for that. And a little bird told me that you promised to go to chemistry class again. This IS chemistry already, @1AmberRose1!
Kind regards< Gus


Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #4 on: March 16, 2019, 11:37:22
Liking the upwards going melody at first. After one minute it feels like it cuold go in another direction. Always cool to hear this sketches, and halflings - the stuff of which songs are forged.
Keep at it, after college!
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.


Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #5 on: March 20, 2019, 14:55:20

Hi@1AmberRose1

I love seeing you look for yourself through music in moments of tension. Your way of writing-singing is direct, it does not describe surroundings or decorations, it is simply a feeling of that moment. Your song is young and spontaneous.

When you do not compose not to escape only but because you give yourself that time, your songs will stop being in a hurry and your yourself will be surprised.

 I'm looking forward to hearing those other new songs done calmly.
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #6 on: March 20, 2019, 15:37:28
When you do not compose not to escape only but because you give yourself that time, your songs will stop being in a hurry and your yourself will be surprised.

Wisdom.

But don't push that river as these songs are important. Let them flow out just like this and there will come a time when one of them....or maybe a combination of a few...will become a fully fledged song.

You have a wonderful uniqueness to your vocal style that comes right out. I look forward to hearing more.
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Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #7 on: March 24, 2019, 01:43:11
Hi @1AmberRose1 . Yes, the song is very straightforward and beautifully sketchy. So, in my mind, I inevitably started hearing other instruments on it as well. If you like, I could add a bass and possibly some percussion to it. You could post the result as an alternative version of the song, because what you did definitely has its own charm.
Pleudoniem: composer; bass guitarist; guitarist; singer; drummer; tap-guitarist - o, and yes... erm- a bit of keys. Open for collabs.
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Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #8 on: March 24, 2019, 10:16:36
Thank you for this comment @1AmberRose1 - it makes the team feel we are doing something right.  :pompom: :pompom: :pompom:

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I really appreciate you guys for taking the time to listen to mine and everyones songs/performances and ideas on this forum, a very safe creative place for everyone

A nice spontaneous and alive sounding track. Almost a postcard of a song. Hey when you are releasing your first album I want you to call it "Postcards" and you can give me a credit for the album title.  :dance: :dance: :dance:

Keep of catching all your feelings and songwriting. It is good for your health and good for your soul.   

Good Job

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Re: 'will u be alright?' new song
Reply #9 on: March 24, 2019, 19:29:31
@Bill from November Sound Thanks!! im glad my message was clear because thats exactly what i was thinking when i wrote it!!

@Kellyanneg woah thanks, and thanks for listening to Far Too Gone too! :)

@LePlongeur I recently posted a longer one yesterday! Im gonna share it with you all soon. I'll definitely check out Taimane Gardner :thumbsup: also your comment about how you could use my music to forget about the rain makes me so happy!!

@oorlab i'll try to work on it to see if i can get it to change direction, its always hard to add more because i'm scared ill ruin it, thanks for your comment!

@Mora Amaro La Loba  You know, i've always wondered why I seem to write short little sections of songs and i think you've solved it even though it was evident anyways. I'm very impulsive when i write them and they're very emotional-based.  i want to thank you for your advice and i agree with @Leonard Scaper. your comment was WISDOM :praise:

@Pleudoniem Wow! that would be amazing! i would be so grateful, i'm very interested in hearing how it would sound with different instruments

@MrBouzouki Postcards! That's a fun idea  ;D and i would totally give you credit lol! Thanks for listening :)


sorry for this big long post!  :loveit:



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