• Won't You
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Re: Won't You
Reply #15 on: July 08, 2019, 00:55:54
You sing with a lot of passion and this has a really nice melody.  ::headphone::

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Re: Won't You
Reply #16 on: July 08, 2019, 01:07:57
Cheers man, appreciated! I followed you on Soundcloud and going to go through your stuff shortly

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Re: Won't You
Reply #17 on: July 09, 2019, 17:21:31
A great song and I easily could imagine it in more context (...which is something I often do: adding string parts in my mind, maybe an harmonica would work and then just letting the imagination run wild, it would make for a song on a bigger stage as a bigger arrangement... but thatís just how I hear it).

Iím not a singer myself but Iíve learned one thing or another and one important  is not to sit down whilst singing energetically. It puts even more strain on the neck and makes proper breathing even harder, so itís kinda advanced singing. Think most people benefit from standing up.

Another thing that was pointed out earlier is not to sing with your chin raised, pull the microphone down so itís parallel or below your mouth if possible. :sleepy:

I could hear some Jagger in your voice and thatís cool, sounding good in this song but personally I think you should also try to sing more like you do in the more low intensity parts. If you dial down the high energy your voice will sound really good (I hear small bits of it, in between the more intense parts so itís definitely there).

Keep the good stuff coming  ::headphone::

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Re: Won't You
Reply #18 on: July 09, 2019, 19:20:57
I agree with others @realkevm - lyrically this is the best song I`ve heard from you ::thumb::
You`ve already had tons of feedback on the vocals. I did notice the mic position is better on the live take. I also noticed that standing , maybe combined with having an audience, makes for  less motion around the mic.
This is a keeper- would love to hear it with that harp/arrangement @Layerson suggested.


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Re: Won't You
Reply #19 on: July 10, 2019, 01:14:04
Hi @realkevm

Well done - good lyrics and I liked the intro a lot.

Plenty of emotion and feeling in your voice as well.

The live version is also really good.


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Re: Won't You
Reply #20 on: July 10, 2019, 09:50:08
Thanks guys
@Layerson When I get to record this in a proper studio with an engineer I do picture it as having strings and being a big production. You're correct about standing to sing better, I do when practicing just for some videos I like to sit down, especially if it's a slower song. Thank you so much for the kind and helpful feedback :)

@robertkc Thanks man and thanks for checking out both versions :)

@Jurgen Cheers my man, really appreciated.

I've got another song on here called 'Come With Me' it's more of a rock tune and i'd love to hear you guy's thoughts on it

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