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Would appreciate some feedback!
on: May 21, 2018, 18:08:02
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Hi Guys,

I'm new to this forum. I've been working hard at songwriting over the past few years and would love to get some input on a few songs. Here is my first one!

Thank you very much!

https://soundcloud.com/neal-alexander-2/neal-alexander-careless-for-love


Re: Would appreciate some feedback!
Reply #1 on: May 21, 2018, 18:35:02
Hi Guys,

I'm new to this forum. I've been working hard at songwriting over the past few years and would love to get some input on a few songs. Here is my first one!

Thank you very much!

https://soundcloud.com/neal-alexander-2/neal-alexander-careless-for-love
Perfect song dude :)
I hear those years of experience on that track
I dont see any bad parts of that song everything sound correct and made with passion


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Reply #2 on: May 21, 2018, 19:04:37
hi @Neal thanks for joining the kicthen

grab a kitchen chair and make yourself at home

yes, this sounds super, great mix and raps and vocals  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::  ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: nice one  ::thumb::
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Reply #3 on: May 21, 2018, 20:43:41
@Kajetan Zduniak

Hey Man,

Thanks for taking a few minutes to check out the song. Much respect


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Reply #4 on: May 21, 2018, 20:48:28
@Dutchbeat

Appreciate the love. Thanks again for reaching out and letting me know about this forum. Looking forward to hear what everybody is "cooking up" on here haha. Glad to be apart of The Kitchen!!


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Reply #5 on: May 22, 2018, 17:51:15
Wow - Welcome to the kitchen @Neal !

This song has great potential - there is nothing I can hear missing or needs improving.
I don’t actively listen to this genre as much, but this is what’s in demand and you’re nailing it.

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Reply #6 on: May 23, 2018, 02:16:34
Welcome to the Kitchen @Neal

and thanks for sharing your song - I really enjoyed it. I'm a fan of this type of music, the backing track is really catchy as is the hook.

You have a good spoken voice for the rap parts.

A well constructed song - well done!

cheers



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