Would appreciate some feedback!

Hi Guys,

I'm new to this forum. I've been working hard at songwriting over the past few years and would love to get some input on a few songs. Here is my first one!

Thank you very much!

https://soundcloud.com/neal-alexander-2/neal-alexander-careless-for-love

Hi Guys,

I'm new to this forum. I've been working hard at songwriting over the past few years and would love to get some input on a few songs. Here is my first one!

Thank you very much!

https://soundcloud.com/neal-alexander-2/neal-alexander-careless-for-love

Perfect song dude
I hear those years of experience on that track
I dont see any bad parts of that song everything sound correct and made with passion

hi @Neal thanks for joining the kicthen

grab a kitchen chair and make yourself at home

yes, this sounds super, great mix and raps and vocals    nice one 

@Kajetan Zduniak

Hey Man,

Thanks for taking a few minutes to check out the song. Much respect

@Dutchbeat

Appreciate the love. Thanks again for reaching out and letting me know about this forum. Looking forward to hear what everybody is "cooking up" on here haha. Glad to be apart of The Kitchen!!

Wow - Welcome to the kitchen @Neal !

This song has great potential - there is nothing I can hear missing or needs improving.
I don’t actively listen to this genre as much, but this is what’s in demand and you’re nailing it.

     

Welcome to the Kitchen @Neal

and thanks for sharing your song - I really enjoyed it. I'm a fan of this type of music, the backing track is really catchy as is the hook.

You have a good spoken voice for the rap parts.

A well constructed song - well done!

cheers